improving article and fixing TOC

Author: jmprieur

articles/active-directory/develop/TOC.yml

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
       - name: .NET Core console (daemon)
         href: quickstart-v2-netcore-daemon.md
       - name: Python console daemon
-        href: quickstart-v2-python-webapp.md
+        href: quickstart-v2-python-daemon.md
       - name: ASP.NET daemon web app
         href: https://github.com/Azure-Samples/active-directory-dotnet-daemon-v2
   - name: Tutorials

articles/active-directory/develop/quickstart-v2-python-daemon.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Microsoft identity platform Python daemon | Azure
-description: Learn how a Python process can get an access token and call an API protected by Microsoft identity platform endpoint using the app's own identity
+description: Learn how a Python process can get an access token and call an API protected by Microsoft identity platform endpoint, using the app's own identity
 services: active-directory
 documentationcenter: dev-center-name
 author: jmprieur
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ ms.collection: M365-identity-device-management
 
 # Quickstart: Acquire a token and call Microsoft Graph API from a Python console app using app's identity
 
-In this quickstart, you'll learn how to write a Python application that can get an access token using the app's own identity and then call the Microsoft Graph API to display a [list of users](https://docs.microsoft.com/graph/api/user-list) in the directory. This scenario is useful for situations where headless, unattended job or a windows service needs to run with an application identity, instead of a user's identity.
+In this quickstart, you'll learn how to write a Python application that can get an access token using the app's own identity, and then call the Microsoft Graph API to display a [list of users](https://docs.microsoft.com/graph/api/user-list) in the directory. This scenario is useful for situations where headless, unattended job or a windows service needs to run with an application identity, instead of a user's identity.
 
 ![Shows how the sample app generated by this quickstart works](media/quickstart-v2-netcore-daemon/netcore-daemon-intro.svg)
 
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ To run this sample, you will need:
 
 1. Extract the zip file to a local folder close to the root of the disk, for example, **C:\Azure-Samples**.
 1. navigate to the sub folder **1-Call-MsGraph-WithSecret"**.
-1. Edit **parameters.json** and replace the values of the fields `authority`, `client_id` and `secret` with the following:
+1. Edit **parameters.json** and replace the values of the fields `authority`, `client_id`, and `secret` with the following snippet:
 
     ```json
     "authority": "https://login.microsoftonline.com/Enter_the_Tenant_Id_Here",
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ To run this sample, you will need:
 
 #### Step 4: Admin consent
 
-If you try to run the application at this point, you'll receive *HTTP 403 - Forbidden* error: `Insufficient privileges to complete the operation`. This happens because any *app-only permission* requires Admin consent, which means that a global administrator of your directory must give consent to your application. Select one of the options below depending on your role:
+If you try to run the application at this point, you'll receive *HTTP 403 - Forbidden* error: `Insufficient privileges to complete the operation`. This error happens because any *app-only permission* requires Admin consent: a global administrator of your directory must give consent to your application. Select one of the options below depending on your role:
 
 ##### Global tenant administrator