Update ran-insights-monitor-with-correlated-metrics-concepts.md

Updating with Rob Swain feedback

Author: delnas

articles/private-5g-core/ran-insights-monitor-with-correlated-metrics-concepts.md

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 title: Monitor with correlated metrics in Azure portal
-description: Learn about correlated metrics between 1P and 3P data  
+description: Learn about correlated metrics between RAN and packet core metrics  
 author: delnas
 ms.author: delnas
 ms.service: private-5g-core
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 # Monitoring with Azure Monitor correlated metrics 
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-Correlated metrics display a graphical view of correlated RAN and core metrics to help troubleshoot issues. You can use these metrics to help draw conclusions about the cause of issues and set alerts if the difference between two metrics exceeds a certain threshold for a prolonged period.
+Correlated metrics compares the values of two metrics, one from the RAN and one from the packet core. You can use these metrics to help draw conclusions about the cause of issues and set alerts if the difference between two metrics exceeds a certain threshold for a prolonged period.
 
 These metrics are available at your Site Resource under the **Metrics** page. Once you have [set up](ran-insights-create-resource.md) your radio access network (RAN) insights resource, these metrics will automatically be populated with information. No other configuration is needed. 
 
 ## Visualize correlated metrics using the Azure portal 
-Each correlated metric compares the values of two metrics, one from the RAN and one from the packet core. In normal operation the two values should be in the same range. You can use alerts to notify you if the correlation value drops below or above a certain range. For example, you might want an alert if it falls below the lower threshold of 80% and above the higher threshold of 120%. 
+Correlated metrics display a graphical view of correlated RAN and core metrics to help troubleshoot issues. In normal operation the two values should be in the same range. You can use alerts to notify you if the correlation value drops below or above a certain range. For example, you might want an alert if it falls below the lower threshold of 80% and above the higher threshold of 120%. 
 
   :::image type="content" source="media/ran-insights/RAN-insights-correlated-metrics.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal showing site resource correlated metrics.":::