Merge pull request #239494 from asudbring/vnet-old-review

May VNET article review - Azure network latency

Author: ttorble

articles/networking/azure-network-latency.md

@@ -2,24 +2,24 @@
 title: Azure network round-trip latency statistics
 description: Learn about round-trip latency statistics between Azure regions.
 services: networking
-author: mbender-ms
+author: asudbring
 ms.service: virtual-network
 ms.topic: article
-ms.date: 06/30/2022
-ms.author: mbender
+ms.date: 05/28/2023
+ms.author: allensu
 ---
 
 # Azure network round-trip latency statistics
 
-Azure continuously monitors the latency (speed) of core areas of its network using internal monitoring tools as well as measurements collected by [ThousandEyes](https://thousandeyes.com), a third-party synthetic monitoring service.
+Azure continuously monitors the latency (speed) of core areas of its network using internal monitoring tools and measurements collected by [ThousandEyes](https://thousandeyes.com), a third-party synthetic monitoring service.
 
 ## How are the measurements collected?
 
-The latency measurements are collected from ThousandEyes agents, hosted in Azure cloud regions worldwide, that continuously send network probes between themselves in 1-minute intervals. The monthly latency statistics are derived from averaging the collected samples for the month.
+The latency measurements are collected from ThousandEyes agents, hosted in Azure cloud regions worldwide, that continuously sends network probes between themselves in 1-minute intervals. The monthly latency statistics are derived from averaging the collected samples for the month.
 
 ## June 2022 round-trip latency figures
 
-The monthly Percentile P50 round trip times between Azure regions for the past 30 days (ending on June 30, 2022) are shown below. The following measurements are powered by  [ThousandEyes](https://thousandeyes.com).
+The monthly Percentile P50 round trip times between Azure regions for the past 30 days (ending on June 30, 2022) are shown as follows. The following measurements are powered by  [ThousandEyes](https://thousandeyes.com).
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/azure-network-latency/azure-network-latency-thmb-july-2022.png" alt-text="Chart of the inter-region latency statistics as of June 30, 2022." lightbox="media/azure-network-latency/azure-network-latency-july-2022.png":::