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Author: RoseHJM

articles/deployment-environments/overview-what-is-azure-deployment-environments.md

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 A [*deployment environment*](./concept-environments-key-concepts.md#environments) is a collection of Azure infrastructure resources defined in a template called an [*environment definition*](./concept-environments-key-concepts.md#environment-definitions). Developers can deploy infrastructure defined in the templates in subscriptions where they have access, and build their applications on the infrastructure. For example, you can define a deployment environment that includes a web app, a database, and a storage account. Your web developer can begin coding the web app without worrying about the underlying infrastructure.
 
-Platform engineers can create and manage environment definitions. To specify which environment definitions are available to developers, platform engineers can associate environment definitions with projects, and assign permissions to developers. They can also apply Azure governance based on the type of environment, such as sandbox, testing, staging, or production.
+Platform engineers can create and manage environment definitions. To specify which environment definitions are available to developers, platform engineers can associate environment definitions with projects, and assign permissions to developers. 
 
-Azure Deployment Environments helps platform engineers apply the right set of policies and settings on various types of environments, control the resource configuration that developers can create, and track environments across projects.
+Azure Deployment Environments helps platform engineers apply the right set of policies and settings on various types of environments, control the resource configuration that developers can create, and track environments across projects. They can apply Azure governance based on the type of environment, such as sandbox, testing, staging, or production.
 
 The following diagram shows an overview of Azure Deployment Environments capabilities. Platform engineers define infrastructure templates and configure subscriptions, identity, and permissions. Developers create environments based on the templates, and build and deploy applications on the infrastructure. Environments can support different scenarios, like on-demand environments, sandbox environments for testing, and CI/CD pipelines for continuous integration and continuous deployment.