Incorporated feedback into Fleet docs

Author: schaffererin

articles/kubernetes-fleet/access-fleet-kubernetes-api.md

@@ -2,28 +2,36 @@
 title: "Access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource"
 description: Learn how to access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource.
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 03/18/2024
+ms.date: 03/20/2024
 author: shashankbarsin
 ms.author: shasb
 ms.service: kubernetes-fleet
-ms.custom:
-  - ignite-2023
 ---
 
 # Access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource with Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager
 
-If your Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource was created with the hub cluster enabled, then it can be used to centrally control scenarios like Kubernetes object propagation. In this article, you learn how to access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource.
+If your Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource was created with the hub cluster enabled, then it can be used to centrally control scenarios like Kubernetes resource propagation. In this article, you learn how to access the Kubernetes API of the hub cluster managed by the Fleet resource.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 [!INCLUDE [free trial note](../../includes/quickstarts-free-trial-note.md)]
 
-* You must have a Fleet resource with a hub cluster and member clusters with deployed workloads. If you don't have this resource, follow [Quickstart: Create a Fleet resource and join member clusters](quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md).
-* The identity (user or service principal) you're using needs to have the Microsoft.ContainerService/fleets/listCredentials/action and Microsoft.ContainerService/managedClusters/listClusterUserCredential/action permissions on the Fleet and AKS resource types.
+* You must have a Fleet resource with a hub cluster and member clusters. If you don't have this resource, follow [Quickstart: Create a Fleet resource and join member clusters](quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md).
+* The identity (user or service principal) you're using needs to have the Microsoft.ContainerService/managedClusters/listClusterUserCredential/action permissions on the Fleet and AKS resource types.
 
 ## Access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource cluster
 
-1. Get the kubeconfig file of the hub cluster Fleet resource using the [`az fleet get-credentials`][az-fleet-get-credentials] command.
+1. Set the following environment variables for your subscription ID, resource group, and Fleet resource, and set the default Azure subscription to use using the [`az account set`][az-account-set] command.
+
+    ```azurecli-interactive
+    export SUBSCRIPTION_ID=<subscription-id>
+    az account set --subscription ${SUBSCRIPTION_ID}
+
+    export GROUP=<resource-group-name>
+    export FLEET=<fleet-name>
+    ```
+
+2. Get the kubeconfig file of the hub cluster Fleet resource using the [`az fleet get-credentials`][az-fleet-get-credentials] command.
 
     ```azurecli-interactive
     az fleet get-credentials --resource-group ${GROUP} --name ${FLEET}
@@ -35,13 +43,13 @@ If your Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource was created with the hub cluster
     Merged "hub" as current context in /home/fleet/.kube/config
     ```
 
-2. Set the following environment variable for the `id` of the hub cluster Fleet resource:
+3. Set the following environment variable for the `id` of the hub cluster Fleet resource:
 
     ```azurecli-interactive
     export FLEET_ID=/subscriptions/${SUBSCRIPTION_ID}/resourceGroups/${GROUP}/providers/Microsoft.ContainerService/fleets/${FLEET}
     ```
 
-3. Authorize your identity to the hub cluster Fleet resource's Kubernetes API server using the following commands:
+4. Authorize your identity to the hub cluster Fleet resource's Kubernetes API server using the following commands:
 
     For the `ROLE` environment variable, you can use one of the following four built-in role definitions as the value:
 
@@ -75,7 +83,7 @@ If your Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource was created with the hub cluster
     }
     ```
 
-4. Verify the status of the member clusters using the `kubectl get memberclusters` command.
+5. Verify you can access the API server using the `kubectl get memberclusters` command.
 
     ```bash
     kubectl get memberclusters

articles/kubernetes-fleet/l4-load-balancing.md

@@ -2,13 +2,12 @@
 title: "How to set up multi-cluster Layer 4 load balancing across Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager member clusters (preview)"
 description: Learn how to use Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager to set up multi-cluster Layer 4 load balancing across workloads deployed on multiple member clusters.
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 09/09/2022
+ms.date: 03/20/2024
 author: shashankbarsin
 ms.author: shasb
 ms.service: kubernetes-fleet
 ms.custom:
   - devx-track-azurecli
-  - ignite-2023
 ---
 
 # Set up multi-cluster layer 4 load balancing across Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager member clusters (preview)
@@ -25,13 +24,14 @@ You can follow this document to set up layer 4 load balancing for such multi-clu
 
 * Read the [conceptual overview of this feature](./concepts-l4-load-balancing.md), which provides an explanation of `ServiceExport` and `MultiClusterService` objects referenced in this document.
 
-* You must have a fleet resource with member clusters with deployed workload. If you don't have this resource, follow [Quickstart: Create a Fleet resource and join member clusters](quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md) and [Propagate Kubernetes configurations from a Fleet resource to member clusters](resource-propagation.md).
-
-* These target clusters should be using [Azure CNI (Container Networking Interface) networking](../aks/configure-azure-cni.md).
+* You must have a Fleet resource with a hub cluster and member clusters. If you don't have this resource, follow [Quickstart: Create a Fleet resource and join member clusters](quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md).
 
 * The target Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) clusters on which the workloads are deployed need to be present on either the same [virtual network](../virtual-network/virtual-networks-overview.md) or on [peered virtual networks](../virtual-network/virtual-network-peering-overview.md).
 
-* These target clusters have to be [added as member clusters to the Fleet resource](./quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md#join-member-clusters).
+  * These target clusters have to be [added as member clusters to the Fleet resource](./quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md#join-member-clusters).
+  * These target clusters should be using [Azure CNI (Container Networking Interface) networking](../aks/configure-azure-cni.md).
+
+* You must gain access to the Kubernetes API of the hub cluster by following the steps in [Access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource](./access-fleet-kubernetes-api.md).
 
 * Set the following environment variables and obtain the kubeconfigs for the fleet and all member clusters:
 
@@ -45,11 +45,9 @@ You can follow this document to set up layer 4 load balancing for such multi-clu
     az aks get-credentials --resource-group ${GROUP} --name ${MEMBER_CLUSTER_1} --file aks-member-1
     ```
 
-  * If the Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource was created with the hub cluster enabled, then it can be used to centrally control scenarios like Kubernetes object propagation. To access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource cluster, follow the steps in the [Access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource cluster with Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager](access-fleet-kubernetes-api.md) article.
-
 [!INCLUDE [preview features note](~/articles/reusable-content/azure-cli/azure-cli-prepare-your-environment-no-header.md)]
 
-## Deploy a sample workload to demo clusters
+## Deploy a workload across member clusters of the Fleet resource
 
 > [!NOTE]
 >

articles/kubernetes-fleet/quickstart-create-fleet-and-members-portal.md

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
 title: "Quickstart: Create an Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource and join member clusters using Azure portal"
 description: In this quickstart, you learn how to create an Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource and join member clusters using Azure portal.
-ms.date: 03/18/2024
+ms.date: 03/20/2024
 author: shashankbarsin
 ms.author: shasb
 ms.service: kubernetes-fleet
-ms.custom: template-quickstart, mode-other, ignite-2023
+ms.custom: template-quickstart, mode-other
 ms.devlang: azurecli
 ms.topic: quickstart
 ---

articles/kubernetes-fleet/resource-propagation.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title: "Using cluster resource propagation (preview)"
 description: Learn how to use Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager to intelligently place workloads across multiple clusters.
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 10/31/2023
+ms.date: 03/20/2024
 author: phealy
 ms.author: pahealy
 ms.service: kubernetes-fleet
@@ -27,9 +27,9 @@ Fleet workload placement can deploy any Kubernetes objects to clusters In order
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - Read the [conceptual overview of this feature](./concepts-resource-propagation.md), which provides an explanation of `MemberCluster` and `ClusterResourcePlacement` referenced in this document.
-- A Kubernetes Fleet with a hub cluster and member clusters (see the [quickstart](quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md) for provisioning instructions).
+- You must have a Fleet resource with a hub cluster and member clusters. If you don't have this resource, follow [Quickstart: Create a Fleet resource and join member clusters](quickstart-create-fleet-and-members.md).
 - Member clusters must be labeled appropriately in the hub cluster to match the desired selection criteria. Example labels could include region, environment, team, availability zones, node availability, or anything else desired.
-- If the Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager resource was created with the hub cluster enabled, then it can be used to centrally control scenarios like Kubernetes object propagation. To access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource cluster, follow the steps in the [Access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource cluster with Azure Kubernetes Fleet Manager](access-fleet-kubernetes-api.md) article.
+- You must gain access to the Kubernetes API of the hub cluster by following the steps in [Access the Kubernetes API of the Fleet resource](./access-fleet-kubernetes-api.md).
 
 ## Resource placement with `ClusterResourcePlacement` resources