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articles/azure-sql/database/single-database-create-quickstart.md

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 # [Azure CLI](#tab/azure-cli)
 
-You can create an Azure resource group, server, and single database using the Azure command-line interface (Azure CLI).
+The Azure CLI code blocks in this section create a resource group, server, single database, and server-level IP firewall rule for access to the server. Make sure to record the generated resource group and server names, so you can manage these resources later.
 
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@@ -123,7 +123,7 @@ az sql db create \
 
 # [Azure CLI (sql up)](#tab/azure-cli-sql-up)
 
-The following Azure CLI code blocks create a resource group, server, single database, and server-level IP firewall rule for access to the server. Make sure to record the generated resource group and server names, so you can manage these resources later.
+The Azure CLI code blocks in this section use the [az sql up](/cli/azure/sql#az_sql_up) command to simplify the database creation process.  With it, you can create a database and all of its associated resources with a single command. This includes the resource group, server name, server location, database name, and login information. The database is created with a default pricing tier of General Purpose, Provisioned, Gen5, 2 vCores.
 
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 ### Create a database and resources
 
-The [az sql up](/cli/azure/sql#az_sql_up) command simplifies the database creation process. With it, you can create a database and all of its associated resources with a single command. This includes the resource group, server name, server location, database name, and login information. The database is created with a default pricing tier of General Purpose, Provisioned, Gen5, 2 vCores.
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-This command creates and configures a [logical server](logical-servers.md) for Azure SQL Database for immediate use. For more granular resource control during database creation, use the standard Azure CLI commands in this article.
+Use the [az sql up](/cli/azure/sql#az_sql_up) command to create and configure a [logical server](logical-servers.md) for Azure SQL Database for immediate use. Make sure to record the generated resource group and server names, so you can manage these resources later.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > When running the `az sql up` command for the first time, Azure CLI prompts you to install the `db-up` extension. This extension is currently in preview. Accept the installation to continue. For more information about extensions, see [Use extensions with Azure CLI](/cli/azure/azure-cli-extensions-overview).