Merge pull request #290233 from v-thepet/poli-databox

Policheck: databox-overview and databox-heavy-overview

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articles/databox/data-box-heavy-overview.md

@@ -56,13 +56,13 @@ Data Box Heavy is designed to move massive amounts of data to Azure with little
 
 Previous releases of Data Box, Data Box Disk, and Data Box Heavy didn’t support cross-region data transfer. With the exception of transfers both originating and terminating between the United Kingdom (UK) and the European Union (EU), data couldn’t cross commerce boundaries.
 
-Data Box cross-region data transfer capabilities, now in preview, support offline seamless cross-region data transfers between many regions. This capability allows you to copy your data from a local source and transfer it to a destination within a different country, region, or boundary. It's important to note that the Data Box device isn't shipped across commerce boundaries. Instead, it's transported to an Azure data center within the originating country or region. Data transfer between the source country and the destination region takes place using the Azure network and incurs no additional cost.
+Data Box cross-region data transfer capabilities, now in preview, support offline seamless cross-region data transfers between many regions. This capability allows you to copy your data from a local source and transfer it to a destination within a different country, region, or boundary. It's important to note that the Data Box device isn't shipped across commerce boundaries. Instead, it's transported to an Azure data center within the originating country or region. Data transfer between the source country/region and the destination region takes place using the Azure network and incurs no additional cost.
 
 Although cross-region data transfer doesn't incur additional costs, the functionality is currently in preview and subject to change. Note, too, that some data transfer scenarios take place over large geographic areas. Higher than normal latencies might be encountered during such transfers.
 
 Cross-region transfers are currently supported between the following countries and regions:
 
-| Source Country |  Destination Region |
+| Source Country/Region |  Destination Region |
 |----------------|---------------------|
 | US<sup>1</sup> | EU<sup>2</sup>      |
 | EU<sup>2</sup> | US<sup>1</sup>      |

articles/databox/data-box-overview.md

@@ -171,11 +171,11 @@ Data Box can transfer data based on the region in which service is deployed, the
 
 ## Data resiliency
 
-The Data Box service is geographical in nature and has a single active deployment in one region within each country or commerce boundary. For data resiliency, a passive instance of the service is maintained in a different region, usually within the same country or commerce boundary. In a few cases, the paired region is outside the country or commerce boundary.
+The Data Box service is geographical in nature and has a single active deployment in one region within each country/region or commerce boundary. For data resiliency, a passive instance of the service is maintained in a different region, usually within the same country/region or commerce boundary. In a few cases, the paired region is outside the country/region or commerce boundary.
 
 In the extreme event of any Azure region being affected by a disaster, the Data Box service will be made available through the corresponding paired region. Both ongoing and new orders will be tracked and fulfilled through the service via the paired region. Failover is automatic, and is handled by Microsoft.
 
-For regions paired with a region within the same country or commerce boundary, no action is required. Microsoft is responsible for recovery, which could take up to 72 hours.
+For regions paired with a region within the same country/region or commerce boundary, no action is required. Microsoft is responsible for recovery, which could take up to 72 hours.
 
 For regions that don’t have a paired region within the same geographic or commerce boundary, the customer will be notified to create a new Data Box order from a different, available region and copy their data to Azure in the new region. New orders would be required for the Brazil South, Southeast Asia, and East Asia regions.