Incorporate changes to intro.

Author: TimShererWithAquent

articles/iot-dps/quick-create-simulated-device-tpm-java.md

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 [!INCLUDE [iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-tpm](../../includes/iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-tpm.md)]
 
-In this quickstart, you create a simulated device on a Windows computer, run the Windows TPM simulator as the Hardware Security Module (HSM) of the device, and use a code sample to connect this simulated device with the Device Provisioning Service and your IoT hub.
+In this quickstart, you create a simulated IoT device on a Windows computer. The simulated device includes a TPM simulator as a Hardware Security Module (HSM). You use device sample Java code to connect this simulated device with your IoT hub using an individual enrollment with the Device Provisioning Service (DPS).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/iot-dps/quick-create-simulated-device-tpm-node.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.custom: mvc
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-tpm](../../includes/iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-tpm.md)]
 
-In this quickstart, you create a simulated device on a Windows computer, run the Windows TPM simulator as the Hardware Security Module (HSM) of the device, and use a code sample to connect this simulated device with the Device Provisioning Service and your IoT hub.
+In this quickstart, you create a simulated IoT device on a Windows computer. The simulated device includes a TPM simulator as a Hardware Security Module (HSM). You use device sample Node.js code to connect this simulated device with your IoT hub using an individual enrollment with the Device Provisioning Service (DPS).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/iot-dps/quick-create-simulated-device-tpm-python.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.custom: mvc
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-tpm](../../includes/iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-tpm.md)]
 
-In this quickstart, you create a simulated device on a Windows computer, run the Windows TPM simulator as the Hardware Security Module (HSM) of the device, and use a Python code sample to connect this simulated device with the Device Provisioning Service and your IoT hub.
+In this quickstart, you create a simulated IoT device on a Windows computer. The simulated device includes a TPM simulator as a Hardware Security Module (HSM). You use device sample Python code to connect this simulated device with your IoT hub using an individual enrollment with the Device Provisioning Service (DPS).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/iot-dps/quick-create-simulated-device-x509-java.md

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 [!INCLUDE [iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-x509](../../includes/iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-x509.md)]
 
-In this quickstart, you simulate an X.509 device on a Windows computer and use a code sample to connect this simulated device with the Device Provisioning Service and your IoT hub.
+In this quickstart, you create a simulated X.509 device on a Windows computer. You use device sample Java code to connect this simulated device with your IoT hub using an individual enrollment with the Device Provisioning Service (DPS).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/iot-dps/quick-create-simulated-device-x509-node.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.custom: mvc
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-x509](../../includes/iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-x509.md)]
 
-In this quickstart, you create an enrollment entry in the Device Provisioning Service and simulate an X.509 device, You connect the simulated device with the Device Provisioning Service and register the device on your IoT hub using the Azure IoT Hub Node.js Device SDK.
+In this quickstart, you create a simulated X.509 device on a Windows computer. You use device sample Node.js code to connect this simulated device with your IoT hub using an individual enrollment with the Device Provisioning Service (DPS).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/iot-dps/quick-create-simulated-device-x509-python.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.custom: mvc
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-x509](../../includes/iot-dps-selector-quick-create-simulated-device-x509.md)]
 
-In this quickstart, you simulate an X.509 device on a Windows computer and use a Python code sample to connect this simulated device with the Device Provisioning Service and your IoT hub.
+In this quickstart, you create a simulated X.509 device on a Windows computer. You use device sample Python code to connect this simulated device with your IoT hub using an individual enrollment with the Device Provisioning Service (DPS).
 
 ## Prerequisites