[AQ] edit pass: tutorial-smart-meter-app

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articles/iot-central/energy/tutorial-smart-meter-app.md

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-title: Tutorial - Azure IoT smart meter monitoring | Microsoft Docs
-description: This tutorial shows you how to deploy and use the smart meter monitoring application template for IoT Central.
+title: Tutorial - Azure IoT smart-meter monitoring
+description: This tutorial shows you how to deploy and use an application template for monitoring smart meters in Azure IoT Central.
 author: dominicbetts
 ms.author: dobett
 ms.date: 06/14/2022
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 manager: abjork
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-# Tutorial: Deploy and walk through the smart meter monitoring application template
+# Tutorial: Deploy and walk through an application template for monitoring smart meters
 
-The smart meters not only enable automated billing, but also advanced metering use cases such as real-time readings and bi-directional communication. The _smart meter monitoring_ application template enables utilities and partners to monitor smart meters status and data, define alarms and notifications. It provides sample commands, such as disconnect meter and update software. The meter data can be set up to egress to other business applications and to develop custom solutions.
+Smart meters enable not only automated billing, but also advanced metering use cases like real-time readings and bidirectional communication. 
 
-App's key functionalities:
+An application template enables utilities and partners to monitor the status and data of smart meters, along with defining alarms and notifications. It provides sample commands, such as disconnecting a meter and updating software. You can set up the meter data to egress to other business applications, and to develop custom solutions.
 
-- Meter sample device model
+The app's key functionalities include:
+
+- Sample device model for meters
 - Meter info and live status
-- Meter readings such as energy, power, and voltages
+- Meter readings such as energy, power, and voltage
 - Meter command samples
 - Built-in visualization and dashboards
 - Extensibility for custom solution development
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-app-architecture.png" alt-text="Diagram of smart meter application architecture." border="false":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-app-architecture.png" alt-text="Diagram of the architecture of a smart-meter application." border="false":::
 
-This architecture consists of the following components. Some solutions may not require every component listed here.
+This architecture consists of the following components. Some solutions might not require every component listed here.
 
 ### Smart meters and connectivity
 
-A smart meter is one of the most important devices among all the energy assets. It records and communicates energy consumption data to utilities for monitoring and other use cases, such as billing and demand response. Typically, a meter uses a gateway or bridge to connect to an IoT Central application. To learn more about bridges, see [Use the IoT Central device bridge to connect other IoT clouds to IoT Central](../core/howto-build-iotc-device-bridge.md).
+A smart meter is one of the most important devices among all the energy assets. It records and communicates energy consumption data to utilities for monitoring and other use cases, such as billing and demand response. 
+
+Typically, a meter uses a gateway or bridge to connect to an Azure IoT Central application. To learn more about bridges, see [Use the Azure IoT Central device bridge to connect other IoT clouds to Azure IoT Central](../core/howto-build-iotc-device-bridge.md).
+
+### Azure IoT Central platform
 
-### IoT Central platform
+When you build an Internet of Things (IoT) solution, Azure IoT Central simplifies the build process and helps to reduce the burden and costs of IoT management, operations, and development. With Azure IoT Central, you can easily connect, monitor, and manage your IoT assets at scale. 
 
-When you build an IoT solution, Azure IoT Central simplifies the build process and helps to reduce the burden and costs of IoT management, operations, and development. With IoT Central, you can easily connect, monitor, and manage your Internet of Things (IoT) assets at scale. After you connect your smart meters to IoT Central, the application template uses built-in features such as device models, commands, and dashboards. The application template also uses the IoT Central storage for warm path scenarios such as near real-time meter data monitoring, analytics, rules, and visualization.
+After you connect your smart meters to Azure IoT Central, the application template uses built-in features such as device models, commands, and dashboards. The application template also uses the Azure IoT Central storage for warm path scenarios such as near real-time meter data monitoring, analytics, rules, and visualization.
 
-### Extensibility options to build with IoT Central
+### Extensibility options to build with Azure IoT Central
 
-The IoT Central platform provides two extensibility options: Continuous Data Export (CDE) and APIs. The customers and partners can choose between these options based to customize their solutions for specific needs. For example, one of our partners configured CDE with Azure Data Lake Storage (ADLS). They're using ADLS for long-term data retention and other cold path storage scenarios, such batch processing, auditing and reporting purposes.
+The Azure IoT Central platform provides two extensibility options: Continuous Data Export and APIs. Customers and partners can choose between these options to customize their solutions for their specific needs. 
+
+For example, a partner might configure Continuous Data Export with Azure Data Lake Storage. That partner can then use Data Lake Storage for long-term data retention and other cold path storage scenarios, such batch processing, auditing and reporting.
 
 In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 
-- Create the smart meter app
-- Application walk-through
-- Clean up resources
+- Create an application for monitoring smart meters.
+- Walk through the application.
+- Clean up resources.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-An active Azure subscription. If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F) before you begin.
+To complete this tutorial, you need an active Azure subscription. If you don't have one, [create a free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F) before you begin.
+
+## Create an application for monitoring smart meters
 
-## Create a smart meter monitoring application
+1. Go to the [Azure IoT Central build](https://aka.ms/iotcentral) site. Then sign in with a Microsoft personal, work, or school account. 
 
-1. Navigate to the [Azure IoT Central Build](https://aka.ms/iotcentral) site. Then sign in with a Microsoft personal, work, or school account. Select **Build** from the left-hand navigation bar and then select the **Energy** tab:
+1. Select **Build** from the left menu, and then select the **Energy** tab.
 
-    :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-build.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the Azure IoT Central build site with the energy app templates.":::
+    :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-build.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Azure IoT Central build site with energy app templates.":::
 
-1. Select **Create app** under **Smart meter monitoring**.
+1. Under **Smart meter monitoring**, select **Create app**.
 
-To learn more, see [Create an IoT Central application](../core/howto-create-iot-central-application.md).
+To learn more, see [Create an Azure IoT Central application](../core/howto-create-iot-central-application.md).
 
 ## Walk through the application
 
-The following sections walk you through the key features of the application:
+The following sections walk you through the key features of the application.
 
 ### Dashboard
 
-After you deploy the application template, it comes with sample smart meter device, device model, and a dashboard.
+After you deploy the application template, it comes with a sample smart-meter device, a device model, and a dashboard.
 
-Adatum is a fictitious energy company, who monitors and manages smart meters. On the smart meter monitoring dashboard, you see smart meter properties, data, and sample commands. It enables operators and support teams to proactively perform the following activities before it turns into support incidents:
+Adatum is a fictitious energy company that monitors and manages smart meters. On the dashboard for monitoring smart meters, you see properties, data, and sample commands for meters. The dashboard enables operators and support teams to proactively perform the following activities before they become support incidents:
 
 * Review the latest meter info and its installed [location](../core/howto-use-location-data.md) on the map.
 * Proactively check the meter network and connection status.
-* Monitor Min and Max voltage readings for network health.
+* Monitor minimum and maximum voltage readings for network health.
 * Review the energy, power, and voltage trends to catch any anomalous patterns.
 * Track the total energy consumption for planning and billing purposes.
-* Command and control operations such as reconnect meter and update firmware version. In the template, the command buttons show the possible functionalities and don't send real commands.
+* Perform command and control operations, such as reconnecting a meter and updating firmware version. In the template, the command buttons show the possible functionalities and don't send real commands.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-dashboard.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the smart meter monitoring dashboard." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-dashboard.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-dashboard.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the dashboard for monitoring smart meters." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-dashboard.png":::
 
 ### Devices
 
-The app comes with a sample smart meter device. You can see the device details by clicking on the **Devices** tab.
+The app comes with a sample smart-meter device. You can see the device details by selecting the **Devices** tab.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-devices.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the smart meter devices." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-devices.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-devices.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows smart-meter devices." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-devices.png":::
 
-Click on the sample device **SM0123456789** link to see the device details. You can update the writable properties of the device on the **Update Properties** page, and visualize the updated values on the dashboard.
+Select the link for sample device **SM0123456789** to see the device details. You can update the writable properties of the device on the **Update Properties** page, and then visualize the updated values on the dashboard.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-properties.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the smart meter device properties." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-properties.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-properties.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the properties of a smart-meter device." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-properties.png":::
 
-### Device Template
+### Device template
 
-Click on the **Device templates** tab to see the smart meter device model. The model has pre-define interface for Data, Property, Commands, and Views.
+Select the **Device templates** tab to see the model of the smart-meter device. The model has a predefined interface for data, properties, commands, and views.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-template.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing the smart meter device template." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-template.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-template.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows a template for a smart-meter device." lightbox="media/tutorial-iot-central-smart-meter/smart-meter-device-template.png":::
 
 ## Customize your application
 

includes/iot-central-clean-up-resources-industry.md

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 ms.date: 11/11/2022
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-If you don't plan to continue using this application, you can delete it. To do so:
+If you don't plan to continue using this application, you can delete it:
 
-1. In your IoT Central application, go to **Application** > **Management**.
+1. In your Azure IoT Central application, go to **Application** > **Management**.
 1. Select **Delete**, and then confirm your action.

includes/iot-central-customize-appearance.md

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-As an administrator, you can change several settings to customize the user experience in your application:
+As an administrator, you can change settings to customize the user experience in your application.
 
-1. Select **Customization > Appearance**.
-1. To set the masthead logo image, select **Change**.
-1. To set the browser icon image that appears on browser tabs, select **Change**.
-1. You can replace the default **Browser colors** by adding HTML hexadecimal color codes. For more information about **HEX Value** color notation, see [HTML Colors](https://www.w3schools.com/html/html_colors.asp).
-1. You can change the application image on the **Application** > **Management** page.
+Select **Customization** > **Appearance**, and then:
+
+- To set the masthead logo image, select **Change**.
+- To set the browser icon image that appears on browser tabs, select **Change**.
+- Under **Browser colors**, you can replace the default browser colors by adding HTML hexadecimal color codes. For more information about color notation for HEX values, see the W3Schools [HTML Colors](https://www.w3schools.com/html/html_colors.asp) tutorial.
+
+You can change the application image on the **Application** > **Management** page.