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Author: greg-lindsay

articles/traffic-manager/traffic-manager-rum-overview.md

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 # Traffic Manager Real User Measurements overview
 
-When you set up a Traffic Manager profile to use the performance routing method, the service looks at where the DNS query requests are coming from and makes routing decisions to direct those requestors to the Azure region that gives them the lowest latency. This is accomplished by utilizing the network latency intelligence that Traffic Manager maintains for different end-user networks.
+When you set up a Traffic Manager profile to use the performance routing method, the service looks at the origin of the DNS query and makes routing decisions to direct queries to the Azure region that provides the lowest latency. This is accomplished by utilizing the network latency intelligence that Traffic Manager maintains for different end-user networks.
 
-Real User Measurements enables you to measure network latency measurements to Azure regions, from the client applications your end users use, and have Traffic Manager consider that information as well when making routing decisions. By choosing to use the Real User Measurements, you can increase the accuracy of the routing for requests coming from those networks where your end users reside. 
+Real User Measurements enables you to view network latency measurements to Azure regions. You can review the client applications your end users use and have Traffic Manager consider that information when making routing decisions. Using Real User Measurements can increase the accuracy of the routing for requests coming from those networks where your end users reside. 
 
 ## How Real User Measurements work
 
-Real User Measurements work by having your client applications measure latency to Azure regions as it is seen from the end-user networks in which they are used. For example, if you have a web page that is accessed by users across different locations (for example, in the North American regions), you can use Real User Measurements with performance routing method to get them to the best Azure region in which your server application is hosted.
+Real User Measurements works by having your client applications measure latency to Azure regions as it is seen from the end-user networks. For example, if you have a web page that is accessed by users across different locations (for example, in different North American regions), you can use Real User Measurements with the performance routing method to get them to the best Azure region for your server application.
 
 It starts by embedding an Azure provided JavaScript (with a unique key in it) in your web pages. Once that is done, whenever a user visits that webpage, the JavaScript queries Traffic Manager to get information about the Azure regions it should measure. The service returns a set of endpoints to the script that then measure these regions consecutively by downloading a single pixel image hosted in those Azure regions and noting the latency between the time the request was sent and the time when the first byte was received. These measurements are then reported back to the Traffic Manager service.