clarity

Author: bejohnsonmsft

articles/operator-nexus/troubleshoot-neighbor-group-creation-error.md

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
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-title: "Azure Operator Nexus: Cannot create Neighbor Group(s)"
+title: "Azure Operator Nexus: Can't create Neighbor Groups"
 description: Learn how to troubleshoot Neighbor Group creation issues.
 author: benhurj
 ms.author: bejohnson
@@ -12,14 +12,14 @@ ms.date: 11/12/2024
 
 # Overview
 
-While creating Neighbor Group resources in the Azure portal, an AuthorizationFailed error for the Microsoft.Resources/deployments/action permission might occur. The portal adds an empty ipv6 addresses array by default in some circumstances.
+During the creation of Neighbor Group resources in the Azure portal, an AuthorizationFailed error for the Microsoft.Resources/deployments/action permission might occur. The portal adds an empty ipv6 addresses array by default in some circumstances.
 
 ## Diagnosis
 
 ### Immediate Symptoms
-* Neighbor Group resources for NPB are attempted to be created using the portal. Note that the creation of Neighbor Groups is successful when using the az CLI.
-* An authorization error is received: The user does not have access for authorization to perform action `'Microsoft.Resources/deployments/action' over scope '/subscriptions/********-****-****-****-************/providers/Microsoft.Resources/deployments/register' or the scope is invalid. If access was recently granted, please refresh your credentials. (Code: AuthorizationFailed) [ Error code: AuthorizationFailed ]'`.
-* An attempt is made to grant access to the action Microsoft.Resources/deployments/action, but this is not a valid permission in Azure.
+* An attempt is made to create Neighbor Group resources for Network Packet Broker (NPB) using the portal. The creation of Neighbor Groups is successful when using the az CLI.
+* An authorization error is received: The user doesn't have access for authorization to perform action `'Microsoft.Resources/deployments/action' over scope '/subscriptions/********-****-****-****-************/providers/Microsoft.Resources/deployments/register' or the scope is invalid. If access was recently granted, please refresh your credentials. (Code: AuthorizationFailed) [ Error code: AuthorizationFailed ]'`.
+* An attempt is made to grant access to the action Microsoft.Resources/deployments/action, but this permission isn't valid in Azure.
 
 ### Troubleshooting
 * Enabling Network Tap Rule from the portal is also failing.
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Follow these steps for mitigation.
 
 ### Use Az CLI to deploy the resource
 * Inspect the existing deployment and locate the template used
-* Copy it into a ARM template file
+* Copy it into an ARM template file
 * Remove empty IPv6 address array from it
 * Leave parameters as they are before
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Follow these steps for mitigation.
 
 ## Verification
 
-Check the portal to see whether the resource has been created as expected.
+Check the portal to see whether the resource was created as expected.
 
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