Acrolinx

Author: v-regandowner

articles/azure-web-pubsub/includes/try-live-demo.md

@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@ With this live demo, you could join or leave a group and send messages to the gr
 >  **Client Access URL** is a convenience tool provided in the portal to simplify your getting-started experience, you can also use this Client Access URL to do some quick connect test. To write your own application, we provide SDKs in 4 languages to help you generate the URL. 
 
 - Try different groups to join and different groups to send messages to, and see what messages are received. For example:
-    - Make two clients joining into the same group. You will see that the message could broadcast to the group members. 
-    - Make two clients joining into different groups. You will see that the client cannot receive message if it is not group member. 
+    - Make two clients join the same group. You'll see that the message could broadcast to the group members. 
+    - Make two clients join different groups. You'll see that the client can't receive message if it is not group member. 
 - You can also try to uncheck `Roles` when generating the `Client Access URL` to see what will happen when join a group or send messages to a group. For example:
-    - Uncheck the `Send to Groups` permission. You will see that the client cannot send messages to the group. 
-    - Uncheck the `Join/Leave Groups` permission. You will see that the client cannot join a group. 
+    - Uncheck the `Send to Groups` permission. You'll see that the client can't send messages to the group. 
+    - Uncheck the `Join/Leave Groups` permission. You'll see that the client can't join a group.