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Author: maud-lv

articles/managed-grafana/quickstart-managed-grafana-cli.md

@@ -12,15 +12,19 @@ ms.custom: engagement-fy23
 
 # Quickstart: Create an Azure Managed Grafana instance using the Azure CLI
 
-Get started by creating an Azure Managed Grafana workspace using the Azure CLI. Creating a workspace will generate a Managed Grafana instance.
+Get started by creating an Azure Managed Grafana workspace using the Azure CLI. Creating a workspace will generate an Azure Managed Grafana instance.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-- An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free).
-- Minimum required role to create an instance: resource group Contributor.
-- Minimum required role to access an instance: resource group Owner.
+- To create an a new instance:
+  - An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free).
+  - Minimum required role: resource group Contributor.
+
+- To access an instance:
+  - An Azure school or work account with an active subscription.
+  - Minimum required role to access an instance: resource group Owner.
     >[!NOTE]
-    > If you don't meet this requirement, once you've created a new Azure Managed Grafana instance, ask a subscription Owner or User Access Administrator to grant you a Grafana Admin, Grafana Editor or Grafana Viewer role on the instance.
+    > If you don't meet this requirement, once you've created a new Azure Managed Grafana instance, ask a User Access Administrator, subscription Owner or resource group Owner to grant you a Grafana Admin, Grafana Editor or Grafana Viewer role on the instance.
 
 ## Sign in to Azure
 
@@ -32,7 +36,7 @@ az login
 
 This command will prompt your web browser to launch and load an Azure sign-in page.
 
-The CLI experience for Azure Managed Grafana is part of the amg extension for the Azure CLI (version 2.30.0 or higher). The extension will automatically install the first time you run the `az grafana` command.
+The CLI experience for Azure Managed Grafana is part of the `amg` extension for the Azure CLI (version 2.30.0 or higher). The extension will automatically install the first time you run the `az grafana` command.
 
 ## Create a resource group
 
@@ -86,4 +90,4 @@ In the preceding steps, you created an Azure Managed Grafana workspace in a new
 ## Next steps
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
-> [How to configure data sources for Azure Managed Grafana](./how-to-data-source-plugins-managed-identity.md)
+> [How to configure data sources for Azure Managed Grafana](./how-to-data-source-plugins-managed-identity.md)

articles/managed-grafana/quickstart-managed-grafana-portal.md

@@ -12,15 +12,18 @@ ms.custom: engagement-fy23
 
 # Quickstart: Create an Azure Managed Grafana instance using the Azure portal
 
-Get started by creating an Azure Managed Grafana workspace using the Azure portal. Creating a workspace will generate a Managed Grafana instance.
+Get started by creating an Azure Managed Grafana workspace using the Azure portal. Creating a workspace will generate an Azure Managed Grafana instance.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free).
+    >[!NOTE]
+    > Azure Managed Grafana currently only supports logging in with work or school accounts. You can use a personal Microsoft account to create a new instance, but will then need to use a school or work account to access it.
+
 - Minimum required role to create an instance: resource group Contributor.
 - Minimum required role to access an instance: resource group Owner.
     >[!NOTE]
-    > If you don't meet this requirement, once you've created a new Azure Managed Grafana instance, ask a subscription Owner or User Access Administrator to grant you a Grafana Admin, Grafana Editor or Grafana Viewer role on the instance.
+    > If you don't meet this requirement, once you've created a new Azure Managed Grafana instance, ask a User Access Administrator, subscription Owner or resource group Owner to grant you a Grafana Admin, Grafana Editor or Grafana Viewer role on the instance.
 
 ## Create a Managed Grafana workspace
 
@@ -91,4 +94,4 @@ In the preceding steps, you created an Azure Managed Grafana workspace in a new
 ## Next steps
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
-> [How to configure data sources for Azure Managed Grafana](./how-to-data-source-plugins-managed-identity.md)
+> [How to configure data sources for Azure Managed Grafana](./how-to-data-source-plugins-managed-identity.md)