Minor edits post proof-reading again

Author: tknandu

articles/cosmos-db/synapse-link.md

@@ -30,11 +30,11 @@ When compared to the traditional ETL-based solutions, Azure Synapse Link for Azu
 
 ### Reduced complexity with No ETL jobs to manage
 
-Azure Synapse Link allows you to directly access Azure Cosmos DB analytical store using  Azure Synapse Analytics without complex data movement. Any updates made to the operational data are visible in the analytical store in near real-time with no ETL or change feed. You can run large scale analytics against analytical store, from Synapse Analytics, without additional data transformation.
+Azure Synapse Link allows you to directly access Azure Cosmos DB analytical store using  Azure Synapse Analytics without complex data movement. Any updates made to the operational data are visible in the analytical store in near real-time with no ETL or change feed jobs. You can run large scale analytics against analytical store, from Synapse Analytics, without additional data transformation.
 
 ### Near real-time insights into your operational data
 
-You can now get rich insights on your operational data in near real-time, using Azure Synapse Link. ETL-based systems tend to have higher latency for analyzing your operational data, due to many layers to extract, transform and load the operational data. With native integration of Azure Cosmos DB analytical store with Azure Synapse Analytics, you can analyze operational data in near real-time enabling new business scenarios. 
+You can now get rich insights on your operational data in near real-time, using Azure Synapse Link. ETL-based systems tend to have higher latency for analyzing your operational data, due to many layers needed to extract, transform and load the operational data. With native integration of Azure Cosmos DB analytical store with Azure Synapse Analytics, you can analyze operational data in near real-time enabling new business scenarios. 
 
 
 ### No impact on operational workloads