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articles/machine-learning/tutorial-1st-r-experiment.md

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-title: "Tutorial: Logistic regression model in R"
+title: "Tutorial: Use R to create a machine learning model"
 titleSuffix: Azure Machine Learning
-description: In this tutorial, you create a logistic regression model using R packages azuremlsdk and caret to predict likelihood of a fatality in an automobile accident. 
+description: In this tutorial you'll use the Azure Machine Learning R SDK to create a logistic regression model that predicts the likelihood of a fatality in a car accident.
 services: machine-learning
 ms.service: machine-learning
 ms.subservice: core
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 ms.date: 02/07/2020
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-# Tutorial: Create a logistic regression model in R with Azure Machine Learning
+# Tutorial: Use R to create a machine learning model
 [!INCLUDE [applies-to-skus](../../includes/aml-applies-to-basic-enterprise-sku.md)]
 
-In this tutorial you'll use R and Azure Machine Learning to create a logistic regression model that predicts the likelihood of a fatality in an automobile accident. After completing this tutorial, you'll have the practical knowledge of the Azure Machine Learning R SDK to scale up to developing more-complex experiments and workflows.
+In this tutorial you'll use the Azure Machine Learning R SDK to create a logistic regression model that predicts the likelihood of a fatality in a car accident. You'll see how the Azure Machine Learning cloud resources work with R to provide a scalable environment for training and deploying a model.  
 
 In this tutorial, you perform the following tasks:
 > [!div class="checklist"]
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ In this tutorial, you perform the following tasks:
 > * Deploy a prediction endpoint
 > * Test the model from R
 
-If you don’t have an Azure subscription, create a free account before you begin. Try the [free or paid version of Azure Machine Learning](https://aka.ms/AMLFree) today.
+If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a free account before you begin. Try the [free or paid version of Azure Machine Learning](https://aka.ms/AMLFree) today.
 
 
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