edit pass: virtual-machines-batch-5

Author: paulth1

articles/azure-monitor/vm/tutorial-monitor-vm-guest.md

@@ -34,23 +34,23 @@ On the **Monitor** menu in the Azure portal, select **Data Collection Rules**. T
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-create.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-create.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows creating a data collection rule.":::
 
-On the **Basics** tab, enter a **Rule Name**, which is the name of the rule displayed in the Azure portal. Select a **Subscription**, **Resource Group**, and **Region** where the DCR and its associations are stored. These items don't need to be the same as the resources being monitored. The **Platform Type** defines the options that are available as you define the rest of the DCR. Select **Windows** or **Linux** if the rule is associated only with those resources or **Custom** if it's associated with both types.
+On the **Basics** tab, enter a **Rule Name**, which is the name of the rule displayed in the Azure portal. Select a **Subscription**, **Resource Group**, and **Region** where the DCR and its associations are stored. These resources don't need to be the same as the resources being monitored. The **Platform Type** defines the options that are available as you define the rest of the DCR. Select **Windows** or **Linux** if the rule is associated only with those resources or select **Custom** if it's associated with both types.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-basics.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-basics.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows data collection rule basics.":::
 
 ## Select resources
-On the **Resources** tab, identify one or more virtual machines that the DCR applies to. Azure Monitor Agent is installed on any VMs that don't already have it. Select **Add resources** and select either your virtual machines or the resource group or subscription where your virtual machine is located. The DCR applies to all virtual machines in the selected scope.
+On the **Resources** tab, identify one or more virtual machines to which the DCR applies. Azure Monitor Agent is installed on any VMs that don't already have it. Select **Add resources** and select either your virtual machines or the resource group or subscription where your virtual machine is located. The DCR applies to all virtual machines in the selected scope.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-resources.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-resources.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows data collection rule resources.":::
 
 ## Select data sources
-A single DCR can have multiple data sources. For this tutorial, we use the same rule to collect both guest metrics and guest logs. We send metrics to both to Azure Monitor Metrics and to Azure Monitor Logs so that they can be analyzed both with metrics explorer and Log Analytics.
+A single DCR can have multiple data sources. For this tutorial, we use the same rule to collect both guest metrics and guest logs. We send metrics to Azure Monitor Metrics and to Azure Monitor Logs so that they can both be analyzed with metrics explorer and Log Analytics.
 
 On the **Collect and deliver** tab, select **Add data source**. For the **Data source type**, select **Performance counters**. Leave the **Basic** setting and select the counters that you want to collect. Use **Custom** to select individual metric values.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-data-source-metric.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-data-source-metric.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the data collection rule metric data source.":::
 
-Select the **Destination** tab. **Azure Monitor Metrics** should already be listed. Select **Add destination** to add another. Select **Azure Monitor Logs** for the **Destination type**. Select your Log Analytics workspace for the **Account or namespace**. Select **Add data source** to save the data source.
+Select the **Destination** tab. **Azure Monitor Metrics** should already be listed. Select **Add destination** to add another. Select **Azure Monitor Logs** for **Destination type**. Select your Log Analytics workspace for **Account or namespace**. Select **Add data source** to save the data source.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-destination-metric.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-destination-metric.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the data collection rule destination.":::
 
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Select **Add data source** again to add logs to the DCR. For the **Data source t
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-data-source-logs-linux.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-data-source-logs-linux.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the data collection rule Linux log data source.":::
 
-Select the **Destination** tab. **Azure Monitor Logs** should already be selected for the **Destination type**. Select your Log Analytics workspace for the **Account or namespace**. If you don't already have a workspace, you can select the default workspace for your subscription, which is automatically created. Select **Add data source** to save the data source.
+Select the **Destination** tab. **Azure Monitor Logs** should already be selected for **Destination type**. Select your Log Analytics workspace for **Account or namespace**. If you don't already have a workspace, you can select the default workspace for your subscription, which is automatically created. Select **Add data source** to save the data source.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-destination-logs.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-destination-logs.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the data collection rule Logs destination.":::
 
@@ -69,16 +69,16 @@ Select **Review + create** to create the DCR and install the Azure Monitor agent
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-save.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/data-collection-rule-save.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows saving the data collection rule.":::
 
 ## View logs
-Data is retrieved from a Log Analytics workspace by using a log query written in Kusto Query Language (KQL). Although a set of precreated queries are available for virtual machines, we use a simple query to have a look at the events that we're collecting.
+Data is retrieved from a Log Analytics workspace by using a log query written in Kusto Query Language. Although a set of precreated queries are available for virtual machines, we use a simple query to have a look at the events that we're collecting.
 
 Select **Logs** from your virtual machine's menu. Log Analytics opens with an empty query window with the scope set to that machine. Any queries include only records collected from that machine.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> The **Queries** window might open when you open Log Analytics. This includes pre-created queries that you can use. For now, close this window because we're going to manually create a simple query.
+> The **Queries** window might open when you open Log Analytics. It includes precreated queries that you can use. For now, close this window because we're going to manually create a simple query.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/log-analytics.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/log-analytics.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows Log Analytics.":::
 
-In the empty query window, enter either `Event` or `Syslog` depending on whether your machine is running Windows or Linux. Then select **Run**. The events collected within the **Time range** are displayed.
+In the empty query window, enter either **Event** or **Syslog** depending on whether your machine is running Windows or Linux. Then select **Run**. The events collected within the **Time range** are displayed.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > If the query doesn't return any data, you might need to wait a few minutes until events are created on the virtual machine to be collected. You might also need to modify the data source in the DCR to include other categories of events.
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ Select **Metrics** from your virtual machine's menu. Metrics explorer opens with
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/metrics-explorer.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/metrics-explorer.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows metrics explorer.":::
 
-The available guest metrics are displayed. Select a **Metric** to add to the chart.
+The available guest metrics are displayed. Select a metric to add to the chart.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/metrics-explorer-guest-metrics.png" lightbox="media/tutorial-monitor-vm/metrics-explorer-guest-metrics.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows metrics explorer with guest metrics.":::