Updated wording for connection activity states.

Updated the states based on Heidi's comments.

Author: eva-seydl

articles/virtual-desktop/diagnostics-log-analytics.md

@@ -119,9 +119,9 @@ Diagnostic events are sent to Log Analytics when completed.
 
 Log Analytics only reports in these intermediate states for connection activities:
 
-- Started: indicates when a user has selected the app or desktop in the remote desktop client to connect too.
-- Connected: when the user has landed on the VM where the application or desktop is hosted they are entitled to connect.
-- Completed: when either user or server disconnected the session for the started activity.
+- Started: when a user selects and connects to an app or desktop in the Remote Desktop client.
+- Connected: when the user successfully connects to the VM where the app or desktop is hosted.
+- Completed: when the user or server disconnects the session the activity took place in.
 
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