Merge pull request #295722 from LouisBerner/v-loberner-ado-368852-feb-content-freshness-alpa-3

Revised the include for sku support, light edit.

Author: Stacyrch140

articles/databox-online/azure-stack-edge-gpu-configure-tls-settings.yml

@@ -9,24 +9,24 @@ metadata:
 
   ms.service: azure-stack-edge
   ms.topic: how-to
-  ms.date: 02/28/2025
+  ms.date: 03/04/2025
   ms.author: alkohli
 title: |
   Configure TLS 1.2 on Windows clients accessing Azure Stack Edge Pro device
 introduction: |
-  [!INCLUDE [applies-to-GPU-and-pro-r-and-mini-r-skus](../../includes/azure-stack-edge-applies-to-gpu-pro-r-mini-r-sku.md)]
+  [!INCLUDE [applies-to-GPU-and-pro-r-skus](../../includes/azure-stack-edge-applies-to-gpu-pro-r-sku.md)]
 
-  If you use a Windows client to access your Azure Stack Edge Pro device, you are required to configure Transport Layer Security (TLS) 1.2 on your client. This article provides resources and guidelines to configure TLS 1.2 on your Windows client. 
+  If you use a Windows client to access your Azure Stack Edge Pro device, you're required to configure Transport Layer Security (TLS) 1.2 on your client. This article provides resources and guidelines to configure TLS 1.2 on your Windows client. 
 
   The guidelines provided here are based on testing performed on a client running Windows Server 2016.
 prerequisites:
   summary: |
     Before you begin, make sure that you have access to a Windows Server client that can connect to your Azure Stack Edge device. The client should be running Windows Server 2016 or later.
 procedureSection:
   - title: |
-      Configure TLS 1.2 for current PowerShell session
+      Configure TLS 1.2 for the current PowerShell session
     summary: |
-      Use the following steps to configure TLS 1.2 on your client.
+      Use the following steps to configure TLS 1.2 on your client:
     steps:
       - |
         Run PowerShell as administrator.
@@ -37,12 +37,12 @@ procedureSection:
           [Net.ServicePointManager]::SecurityProtocol = [Net.SecurityProtocolType]::Tls12
           ```
   - title: |
-      Configure TLS 1.2 on client
+      Configure TLS 1.2 on the client machine
     summary: |
-      To set system-wide TLS 1.2 for your environment, follow these steps:
+      Use the following steps to set system-wide TLS 1.2 for your environment:
     steps:
       - |
-        To enable TLS 1.2 on the clients, use the guidelines in these documents:
+        To enable TLS 1.2 on the clients, use guidelines in the following articles:
 
           - [General- how to enable TLS 1.2](/windows-server/security/tls/tls-registry-settings#tls-12) 
           - [How to enable TLS 1.2 on clients](/configmgr/core/plan-design/security/enable-tls-1-2-client)
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ procedureSection:
       - |  
         Configure [Cipher Suites](/windows-server/security/tls/tls-registry-settings#tls-12).
           - Specifically [Configuring TLS Cipher Suite Order](/windows-server/security/tls/manage-tls#configuring-tls-cipher-suite-order)
-          - Make sure that you list your current cipher suites and prepend any missing from the following list:
+          - Make sure to list your current cipher suites and prepend any missing from the following list:
 
             * TLS_ECDHE_ECDSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384
             * TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384