edit pass: two-azure-monitor-topics

Author: paulth1

articles/storage/common/monitor-storage.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.reviewer: fryu
 When you have critical applications and business processes that rely on Azure resources, you want to monitor those resources for their availability, performance, and operation. This article describes the monitoring data that's generated by Azure Storage and how you can use the features of Azure Monitor to analyze alerts on this data.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Azure Storage logs in Azure Monitor is in public preview and is available for preview testing in all public cloud regions. To enroll in the preview, see [this page](https://forms.microsoft.com/Pages/ResponsePage.aspx?id=v4j5cvGGr0GRqy180BHbRxW65f1VQyNCuBHMIMBV8qlUM0E0MFdPRFpOVTRYVklDSE1WUTcyTVAwOC4u). This preview enables logs for blobs (including Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2), files, queues, tables, premium storage accounts in general-purpose v1, and general-purpose v2 storage accounts. Classic storage accounts aren't supported.
+> Azure Storage logs in Azure Monitor is in public preview and is available for preview testing in all public cloud regions. To enroll in the preview, see [this page](https://forms.microsoft.com/Pages/ResponsePage.aspx?id=v4j5cvGGr0GRqy180BHbRxW65f1VQyNCuBHMIMBV8qlUM0E0MFdPRFpOVTRYVklDSE1WUTcyTVAwOC4u). This preview enables logs for blobs (which includes Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2), files, queues, tables, premium storage accounts in general-purpose v1, and general-purpose v2 storage accounts. Classic storage accounts aren't supported.
 
 ## Monitor overview
 
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ Log entries are created only if there are requests made against the service endp
  The following types of authenticated requests are logged:
 
 - Successful requests
-- Failed requests, including timeout, throttling, network, authorization, and other errors
-- Requests that use a Shared Access Signature (SAS) or OAuth, including failed and successful requests
-- Requests to analytics data (classic log data in the **$logs** container, and class metric data in the **$metric** tables)
+- Failed requests, which includes timeout, throttling, network, authorization, and other errors
+- Requests that use a Shared Access Signature (SAS) or OAuth, which includes failed and successful requests
+- Requests to analytics data (classic log data in the **$logs** container and class metric data in the **$metric** tables)
 
 Requests made by the storage service itself, like log creation or deletion, aren't logged. For a full list of the logged data, see [Storage logged operations and status messages](/rest/api/storageservices/storage-analytics-logged-operations-and-status-messages) and [Storage log format](monitor-storage-reference.md).
 
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ You also have to specify the categories of operations for which you want to coll
 
 ## Analyze metric data
 
-You can analyze metrics for Azure storage with metrics from other Azure services by using metrics explorer. Open metrics explorer by choosing **Metrics** from the **Azure Monitor** menu. For details on using this tool, see [Getting started with Azure metrics explorer](../../azure-monitor/platform/metrics-getting-started.md). 
+You can analyze metrics for Azure Storage with metrics from other Azure services by using Metrics Explorer. Open Metrics Explorer by choosing **Metrics** from the **Azure Monitor** menu. For details on using this tool, see [Getting started with Azure Metrics Explorer](../../azure-monitor/platform/metrics-getting-started.md). 
 
 This example shows how to view **Transactions** at the account level.
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ All metrics for Azure Storage are located in these namespaces:
 - Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/queueServices
 - Microsoft.Storage/storageAccounts/tableServices
 
-For a list of all Azure Monitor support metrics (including Azure Storage), see [Azure Monitor supported metrics](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/azure-monitor/platform/metrics-supported).
+For a list of all Azure Monitor support metrics, which includes Azure Storage, see [Azure Monitor supported metrics](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/azure-monitor/platform/metrics-supported).
 
 
 ### Access metrics
@@ -298,12 +298,12 @@ The following example shows how to read metric data on the metric supporting mul
 
 ## Analyze log data
 
-You can access Resource logs either as a blob in a storage account, as event data, or through Log Analytic queries.
+You can access resource logs either as a blob in a storage account, as event data, or through Log Analytic queries.
 
 For a detailed reference of the fields that appear in these logs, see [Azure Storage monitoring data reference](monitor-storage-reference.md).
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Azure Storage logs in Azure Monitor is in public preview and is available for preview testing in all public cloud regions. To enroll in the preview, see [this page](https://www.microsoft.com). This preview enables logs for blobs (including Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2), files, queues, tables, premium storage accounts in general-purpose v1, and general-purpose v2 storage accounts. Classic storage accounts aren't supported.
+> Azure Storage logs in Azure Monitor is in public preview and is available for preview testing in all public cloud regions. To enroll in the preview, see [this page](https://www.microsoft.com). This preview enables logs for blobs (which includes Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2), files, queues, tables, premium storage accounts in general-purpose v1, and general-purpose v2 storage accounts. Classic storage accounts aren't supported.
 
 ### Access logs in a storage account