Merge pull request #134290 from ShawnJackson/tutorial-deploy-vmware-hcx

edit pass: tutorial-deploy-vmware-hcx

Author: Ja-Dunn

articles/azure-vmware/includes/hcx-network-segments.md

@@ -7,23 +7,23 @@ ms.date: 09/28/2020
 
 <!-- Used in avs-production-ready-deployment.md and tutorial-deploy-vmware-hcx.md -->
 
-There are four networks needed for VMware HCX:
+Four networks are needed for VMware HCX:
 
-- **Management Network:** Typically, it's the same management network used on the vSphere cluster.  At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX (larger numbers may be needed depending on your deployment).
+- **Management network:** Typically, it's the same management network used on the vSphere cluster. At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX. (You might need larger numbers, depending on your deployment.)
 
-- **vMotion Network:** Typically, it's the same network used for vMotion on the vSphere cluster.  At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX (larger numbers may be needed depending on your deployment).  
+- **vMotion network:** Typically, it's the same network used for vMotion on the vSphere cluster.  At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX. (You might need larger numbers, depending on your deployment.)  
 
    The vMotion network must be exposed on a distributed virtual switch or vSwitch0. If it's not, modify the environment.
 
    > [!NOTE]
-   > If this network is not routed (private), that is OK.
+   > If this network is not routed (private), that's OK.
 
-- **Uplink Network:** You want to create a new network for VMware HCX Uplink and extend it to your vSphere cluster via a port group.  At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX (larger numbers may be needed depending on your deployment).  
+- **Uplink network:** You want to create a new network for VMware HCX Uplink and extend it to your vSphere cluster via a port group. At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX. (You might need larger numbers, depending on your deployment.)  
 
    > [!NOTE]
    > The recommended method is to create a /29 network, but any network size will do.
 
-- **Replication Network:** You want to create a new network for VMware HCX Replication and extend that network to your vSphere cluster via a port group.  At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX (larger numbers may be needed depending on your deployment).
+- **Replication network:** You want to create a new network for VMware HCX Replication and extend that network to your vSphere cluster via a port group. At a minimum, identify two IPs on this network segment for VMware HCX. (You might need larger numbers, depending on your deployment.)
 
    > [!NOTE]
    > The recommended method is to create a /29 network, but any network size will do.