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Co-authored-by: dknappettmsft <[email protected]>

Author: sipastak

articles/virtual-desktop/client-device-redirection-intune.md

@@ -59,8 +59,8 @@ For the Remote Desktop app:
 | Android | ✅ | ✅ |
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
->- You can use Intune mobile application management (MAM) functionality for Windows App on iOS/iPadOS in Azure, Azure operated by 21Vianet (Azure in China), GCC, GCC High, and DoD. 
->- Intune MAM functionality for Windows App on Android is only supported in Azure.  
+>- You can use Intune mobile application management (MAM) functionality with Windows App on iOS/iPadOS in the Intune commercial service (including Intune for US Government GCC), [Intune for US Government GCC High and DoD](/mem/intune/fundamentals/intune-govt-service-description), and [Intune operated by 21Vianet](/mem/intune/fundamentals/china) (China).
+>- Intune MAM functionality for Windows App on Android is only currently supported in the Intune commercial service.
 
 ## Example scenarios