Update troubleshoot-mpe-connection.md

Author: maud-lv

articles/managed-grafana/troubleshoot-mpe-connection.md

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 ## Symptom
 
-Grafana is unable to connect to a private link service that exposes an Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) cluster running a user’s database over a private network. Users may encounter errors such as **504 Gateway Time-out** when attempting to connect.
+Grafana is unable to connect to a private link service that exposes a service running in an Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) cluster. Users may encounter errors such as **504 Gateway Time-out** when attempting to connect.
 
 ## Possible causes