Rephrasing.

Author: roygara

articles/storage/elastic-san/elastic-san-connect-linux.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ This article explains how to connect to an Elastic storage area network (SAN) vo
 
 In this article, you'll add the Storage service endpoint to an Azure virtual network's subnet, then you'll configure your volume group to allow connections from your subnet. Finally, you'll configure your client environment to connect to an Elastic SAN volume and establish a connection.
 
-Connecting an individual elastic SAN volume to multiple clients requires a cluster manager. For details, see [Use clustered applications on Azure Elastic SAN Preview](elastic-san-shared-volumes.md).
+You must use a cluster manager when connecting an individual elastic SAN volume to multiple clients. For details, see [Use clustered applications on Azure Elastic SAN Preview](elastic-san-shared-volumes.md).
 
 ## Prerequisites
 

articles/storage/elastic-san/elastic-san-connect-windows.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ This article explains how to connect to an Elastic storage area network (SAN) vo
 
 In this article, you add the Storage service endpoint to an Azure virtual network's subnet, then you configure your volume group to allow connections from your subnet. Finally, you configure your client environment to connect to an Elastic SAN volume and establish a connection. For best performance, ensure that your VM and your Elastic SAN are in the same zone.
 
-Connecting an individual elastic SAN volume to multiple clients requires a cluster manager. For details, see [Use clustered applications on Azure Elastic SAN Preview](elastic-san-shared-volumes.md).
+You must use a cluster manager when connecting an individual elastic SAN volume to multiple clients. For details, see [Use clustered applications on Azure Elastic SAN Preview](elastic-san-shared-volumes.md).
 
 ## Prerequisites