public repo edit

Author: ktoliver

articles/openshift/howto-using-azure-redhat-openshift.md

@@ -65,15 +65,17 @@ The `az aro` extension allows you to create, access, and delete Azure Red Hat Op
    ...
    ```
 
-### Optionally obtain a Red Hat pull secret
+### Get a Red Hat pull secret (optional)
 
-A Red Hat pull secret enables your cluster to access Red Hat container registries along with additional content.  Its use is optional but recommended.
+A Red Hat pull secret enables your cluster to access Red Hat container registries and additional content. Using a pull secret is optional but recommended.
 
-Obtain your pull secret by navigating to https://cloud.redhat.com/openshift/install/azure/aro-provisioned and clicking *Download pull secret*.
+To get your pull secret:
 
-You will need to log in to your Red Hat account, or create a new Red Hat account with your business email and accept the terms and conditions.
+1. Go to https://cloud.redhat.com/openshift/install/azure/aro-provisioned.
+1. Log in to your Red Hat account, or create a new Red Hat account by using your business email; accept the terms and conditions.
+1. Select **Download pull secret**.
 
-Keep the saved `pull-secret.txt` file somewhere safe, it will be used in each cluster creation.
+Save the *pull-secret.txt* file somewhere safe; you will use the file each time you create a cluster.
 
 ### Create a virtual network containing two empty subnets