PR review fixes

Author: Dana Sindona

articles/marketplace/partner-center-portal/commercial-marketplace-get-customer-leads.md

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ Azure Blob storage is no longer supported as a lead destination, so you're missi
 
 ### I received an email from the commercial marketplace, but why can't I find the lead in my CRM?
 
-It's possible that the end user's email domain is from .edu. For privacy reasons, we don't pass personally identifiable information from the .edu domain. Submit a support ticket through [Partner Center Help and support](https://partner.microsoft.com/support/v2/?stage=1).
+It's possible that the end user's email domain is from .edu. For privacy reasons, we don't pass personal information from the .edu domain. Submit a support ticket through [Partner Center Help and support](https://partner.microsoft.com/support/v2/?stage=1).
 
 ### I configured an Azure table as my lead destination. How can I view the leads?
 
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Check if the web-to-lead form is a mandatory field based on a pick list. If it i
 
 ### There was an issue with my lead destination, and I missed some leads. Can I have them sent to me in an email?
 
-Due to personally identifiable information policies, we can't share lead information through unsecured email.
+Due to personal information policies, we can't share lead information through unsecured email.
 
 ### I configured an Azure table as my lead destination. How much will it cost?
 

articles/marketplace/partner-center-portal/create-consulting-service-offer.md

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ Select **Save draft** before continuing.
 Here you'll define the offer details that are displayed in the marketplace. This includes the offer name, description, images, and so on. Be sure to follow the policies detailed on the [commercial marketplace certification policies page](https://docs.microsoft.com/legal/marketplace/certification-policies#800-consulting-services) while configuring this offer.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Offer details aren't required to be in English if the offer description begins with the phrase, "This application is available only in [non-English language]." It's also okay to provide a Useful Link to offer content in a language that&'s different from the one used in the Offer listing details.
+> Offer details aren't required to be in English if the offer description begins with the phrase, "This application is available only in [non-English language]." It's also okay to provide a Useful Link to offer content in a language that's different from the one used in the Offer listing details.
 
 ### Name