Merge pull request #286035 from nevko/patch-7

CSS-Networking: Update deploy-cli.md

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/firewall/deploy-cli.md

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ In this article, you learn how to:
 * Set up a test network environment
 * Deploy a firewall
 * Create a default route
-* Configure an application rule to allow access to www.google.com
+* Configure an application rule to allow access to www.microsoft.com
 * Configure a network rule to allow access to external DNS servers
 * Test the firewall
 
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ az network nic create \
    --vnet-name Test-FW-VN \
    --subnet Workload-SN \
    --public-ip-address "" \
-   --dns-servers 209.244.0.3 209.244.0.4
+   --dns-servers <replace with External DNS ip #1> <replace with External DNS ip #2>
 ```
 
 Now create the workload virtual machine.
@@ -203,16 +203,16 @@ az network vnet subnet update \
 
 ## Configure an application rule
 
-The application rule allows outbound access to www.google.com.
+The application rule allows outbound access to www.microsoft.com.
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az network firewall application-rule create \
    --collection-name App-Coll01 \
    --firewall-name Test-FW01 \
-   --name Allow-Google \
+   --name Allow-Microsoft \
    --protocols Http=80 Https=443 \
    --resource-group Test-FW-RG \
-   --target-fqdns www.google.com \
+   --target-fqdns www.microsoft.com \
    --source-addresses 10.0.2.0/24 \
    --priority 200 \
    --action Allow
@@ -222,12 +222,12 @@ Azure Firewall includes a built-in rule collection for infrastructure FQDNs that
 
 ## Configure a network rule
 
-The network rule allows outbound access to two IP addresses at port 53 (DNS).
+The network rule allows outbound access to two public DNS IP addresses of your choosing at port 53 (DNS).
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az network firewall network-rule create \
    --collection-name Net-Coll01 \
-   --destination-addresses 209.244.0.3 209.244.0.4 \
+   --destination-addresses <replace with DNS ip #1> <replace with DNS ip #2> \
    --destination-ports 53 \
    --firewall-name Test-FW01 \
    --name Allow-DNS \
@@ -264,14 +264,14 @@ Now, test the firewall to confirm that it works as expected.
 1. Run the following commands:
 
    ```
-   Invoke-WebRequest -Uri https://www.google.com
-   Invoke-WebRequest -Uri https://www.google.com
-
    Invoke-WebRequest -Uri https://www.microsoft.com
    Invoke-WebRequest -Uri https://www.microsoft.com
+
+   Invoke-WebRequest -Uri <Replace with external website>
+   Invoke-WebRequest -Uri <Replace with external website>
    ```
 
-   The `www.google.com` requests should succeed, and the `www.microsoft.com` requests should fail. This demonstrates that your firewall rules are operating as expected.
+   The `www.microsoft.com` requests should succeed, and the other `External Website` requests should fail. This demonstrates that your firewall rules are operating as expected.
 
 So now you've verified that the firewall rules are working: