Minor updates for writing style

Author: dknappettmsft

articles/virtual-desktop/session-host-update.md

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ description: Learn about session host update, which updates the operating system
 ms.topic: conceptual
 author: dknappettmsft
 ms.author: daknappe
-ms.date: 10/01/2024
+ms.date: 01/24/2025
 ---
 
 # Session host update for Azure Virtual Desktop (preview)
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ Here are known issues and limitations:
 
 - For session hosts that were created from an Azure Compute Gallery shared image that has a purchase plan, the plan isn't retained when the session hosts are updated. To check whether the image you use for your session hosts has a purchase plan, you can use [Azure PowerShell](/azure/virtual-machines/windows/cli-ps-findimage) or [Azure CLI](/azure/virtual-machines/linux/cli-ps-findimage).
 
-- Session host configurations do not currently support accessing Gallery images that are located in a different Azure subscription than the host pool.
+- Session host configurations don't currently support accessing an Azure Compute Gallery shared image that's located in a different Azure subscription than the host pool.
 
 - The size of the OS disk can't be changed during an update. The update service defaults to the same size as defined by the gallery image.