Merge pull request #112518 from b-juche/live-update-04-23-Oracle-solution-article-minor-edits

edits to address feedback

Author: v-shils

articles/azure-netapp-files/solutions-benefits-azure-netapp-files-oracle-database.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ ms.workload: storage
 ms.tgt_pltfrm: na
 ms.devlang: na
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 04/20/2020
+ms.date: 04/23/2020
 ms.author: b-juche
 ---
 # Benefits of using Azure NetApp Files with Oracle Database
@@ -22,15 +22,17 @@ Oracle Direct NFS (dNFS) makes it possible to drive higher performance than the
 
 ## How Oracle Direct NFS works
 
-Oracle Direct NFS (dNFS) bypasses the operating system’s buffer cache. Data is cached only once in the user space, eliminating the overhead of memory copies.  
+The following summary explains how Oracle Direct NFS works at a high level:
 
-The traditional NFS client uses a single network flow, as the following example shows: 
+* Oracle Direct NFS bypasses the operating system buffer cache. Data is cached only once in the user space, eliminating the overhead of memory copies.  
 
-![Traditional NFS client using a single network flow](../media/azure-netapp-files/solutions-traditional-nfs-client-using-single-network-flow.png)
+* The traditional NFS client uses a single network flow as shown below:    
 
-In contrast, Oracle dNFS improves performance by load-balancing network traffic across multiple network flows. This capability enables the Oracle database to dynamically establish a significant number of 650 distinct network connections, as shown in the example below:  
+    ![Traditional NFS client using a single network flow](../media/azure-netapp-files/solutions-traditional-nfs-client-using-single-network-flow.png)
 
-![Oracle Direct NFS improving performance](../media/azure-netapp-files/solutions-oracle-direct-nfs-performance-load-balancing.png)
+    Oracle Direct NFS further improves performance by load-balancing network traffic across multiple network flows. As tested and shown below, 650 distinct network connections were established dynamically by the Oracle Database:  
+
+    ![Oracle Direct NFS improving performance](../media/azure-netapp-files/solutions-oracle-direct-nfs-performance-load-balancing.png)
 
 The [Oracle FAQ for Direct NFS](http://www.orafaq.com/wiki/Direct_NFS) shows that Oracle dNFS is an optimized NFS client. It provides fast and scalable access to NFS storage that is located on NAS storage devices (accessible over TCP/IP). dNFS is built into the database kernel just like ASM, which is used primarily with DAS or SAN storage. As such, *the guideline is to use dNFS when implementing NAS storage and use ASM when implementing SAN storage.*