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articles/lighthouse/concepts/managed-services-offers.md

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-title: Managed service offers in Azure Marketplace
-description: Managed service offers allow service providers to sell resource management offers to customers in Azure Marketplace.
+title: Managed Service offers in Azure Marketplace
+description: Managed Service offers allow service providers to sell resource management offers to customers in Azure Marketplace.
 ms.date: 05/04/2020
 ms.topic: conceptual
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-# Managed service offers in Azure Marketplace
+# Managed Service offers in Azure Marketplace
 
-This article describes the **Managed Service** offer type in [Azure Marketplace](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com). Managed service offers allow you to offer resource management services to customers by using [Azure delegated resource management](azure-delegated-resource-management.md). You can make these offers available to all potential customers, or only to one or more specific customers. Since you bill customers directly for costs related to these managed services, there are no fees charged by Microsoft.
+This article describes the **Managed Service** offer type in [Azure Marketplace](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com). Managed service offers allow you to offer resource management services to customers through [Azure delegated resource management](azure-delegated-resource-management.md). You can make these offers available to all potential customers, or only to one or more specific customers. Since you bill customers directly for costs related to these managed services, there are no fees charged by Microsoft.
 
-## Understand managed service offers
+## Understand Managed Service offers
 
-Managed service offers streamline the process of onboarding customers for Azure delegated resource management. When a customer purchases an offer in Azure Marketplace, they'll be able to specify which subscriptions and/or resource groups should be onboarded.
+Managed Service offers streamline the process of onboarding customers for Azure delegated resource management. When a customer purchases an offer in Azure Marketplace, they'll be able to specify which subscriptions and/or resource groups should be onboarded.
 
-After that, users in your organization will be able to work on those resources from within your organization's tenant, according to the access you defined when creating the offer. This is done through a manifest that specifies the Azure AD users, groups, and service principals that will have access to customer resources using Azure delegated resource management, along with roles that define their level of access. By assigning permissions to an Azure AD group rather than a series of individual user or application accounts, you can add or remove individual users when your access requirements change.
+After that, users in your organization will be able to work on those resources from within your organization's tenant, according to the access you defined when creating the offer. This is done through a manifest that specifies the Azure Active Directory (Azure AD) users, groups, and service principals that will have access to customer resources, along with roles that define their level of access. By assigning permissions to an Azure AD group rather than a series of individual user or application accounts, you can add or remove individual users when your access requirements change.
 
 ## Public and private offers
 

articles/lighthouse/how-to/publish-managed-services-offers.md

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 # Publish a Managed Service offer to Azure Marketplace
 
-In this article, you'll learn how to publish a public or private Managed Service offer to [Azure Marketplace](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com) using Partner Center. Customers who purchase the offer are then able to to onboard subscriptions and resource groups for [Azure delegated resource management](../concepts/azure-delegated-resource-management.md).
+In this article, you'll learn how to publish a public or private Managed Service offer to [Azure Marketplace](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com) using the [Commercial Marketplace](../../marketplace/partner-center-portal/commercial-marketplace-overview.md) program in Partner Center. Customers who purchase the offer are then able to to onboard subscriptions and resource groups for [Azure delegated resource management](../concepts/azure-delegated-resource-management.md).
 
 ## Publishing requirements
 
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 ## Publish your offer
 
-Once you've completed all of the sections, your next step is to publish the offer to Azure Marketplace. Select the **Publish** button to initiate the process of making your offer live. More info about this process, can be found here](../../marketplace/partner-center-portal/create-new-managed-service-offer.md#publish). 
+Once you've completed all of the sections, your next step is to publish the offer to Azure Marketplace. Select the **Publish** button to initiate the process of making your offer live. More info about this process, can be found [here](../../marketplace/partner-center-portal/create-new-managed-service-offer.md#publish). 
 
 You can [publish an updated version of your offer](../..//marketplace/partner-center-portal/update-existing-offer.md) at any time. For example, you may want to add a new role definition to a previously-published offer. When you do so, customers who have already added the offer will see an icon in the [**Service providers**](view-manage-service-providers.md) page in the Azure portal that lets them know an update is available. Each customer will be able to [review the changes](view-manage-service-providers.md#update-service-provider-offers) and decide whether they want to update to the new version.