edit pass: whats-new

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/communication-services/whats-new.md

@@ -116,9 +116,9 @@ Try out this feature by using either the UI Library or the Chat SDK. The SDK is
 - [Enable an inline image by using the UI Library in Teams meetings](./tutorials/inline-image-tutorial-interop-chat.md)
 - [GitHub sample: Adding image sharing](https://azure.github.io/communication-ui-library/?path=/docs/composites-call-with-chat-jointeamsmeeting--join-teams-meeting#adding-image-sharing)
 
-### Deep noise suppression for desktop
+### Deep noise suppression
 
-Deep noise suppression is currently in preview. Noise suppression improves VoIP and video calls by eliminating background noise, so it's easier to talk and listen. For example, if you're taking an Azure Communication Services WebJS call in a coffee shop, turning on noise suppression can improve the calling experience by eliminating background noise.
+Deep noise suppression is currently in preview. Noise suppression improves VoIP and video calls by eliminating background noise, so it's easier to talk and listen. For example, if you're taking an Azure Communication Services WebJS call in a coffee shop, turning on noise suppression can improve the calling experience by eliminating background sounds from the shop.
 
 For more information, see [Add audio quality enhancements to your audio calling experience](./tutorials/audio-quality-enhancements/add-noise-supression.md).
 
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ For more information, see [Quickstart: Add video effects to your video calls](./
 
 #### Proxy configuration
 
-Proxy configuration is now generally available. Some environments, such as industries that are highly regulated or that deal with confidential information, require proxies to secure and control network traffic. You can use the Calling SDK to configure the HTTP and media proxies for your Azure Communication Services calls. This way, you can ensure that your communications are compliant with the network policies and regulations. You can use the native SDK methods to set the proxy configuration for your app.
+Proxy configuration is now generally available. Some environments, such as industries that are highly regulated or that deal with confidential information, require proxies to help secure and control network traffic. You can use the Calling SDK to configure the HTTP and media proxies for your Azure Communication Services calls. This way, you can ensure that your communications are compliant with network policies and regulations. You can use the native SDK methods to set the proxy configuration for your app.
 
 For more information, see [Proxy your calling traffic](./tutorials/proxy-calling-support-tutorial.md?pivots=platform-android).
 
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ Now you can integrate your app with Android TelecomManager to take advantage of
 
 The Data Channel API is generally available. Data Channel includes unidirectional communication, which enables real-time messaging during audio and video calls. By using this API, you can integrate data exchange functions into the applications to help provide a seamless communication experience for users.
 
-The Data Channel API enables users to instantly send and receive messages during an ongoing audio or video call, promoting smooth and efficient communication. In group call scenarios, a participant can send messages to a single participant, a specific set of participants, or all participants within the call. This flexibility enhances communication and collaboration among users during group interactions.
+The Data Channel API enables users to instantly send and receive messages during an ongoing audio or video call, promoting smooth and efficient communication. In a group call, a participant can send messages to a single participant, a specific set of participants, or all participants within the call. This flexibility enhances communication and collaboration among users during group interactions.
 
 For more information, see [Data Channel](./concepts/voice-video-calling/data-channel.md).
 
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ For more information, see [Enable audio-only mode in the UI Library](./how-tos/u
 
 Calling to Teams call queues and auto attendants is now generally available in Azure Communication Services, along with click-to-call for Teams Phone. 
 
-Organizations can enable customers to quickly reach their sales and support members on Microsoft Teams. When you add a [click-to-call widget](./tutorials/calling-widget/calling-widget-tutorial.md) onto a website, such as a **Sales** button that points to a sales department, or a **Purchase** button that points to procurement, customers are just one click away from a direct connection to a Teams call queue or auto attendant.
+Organizations can enable customers to quickly reach their sales and support members on Microsoft Teams. When you add a [click-to-call widget](./tutorials/calling-widget/calling-widget-tutorial.md) onto a website, such as a **Sales** button that points to a sales department or a **Purchase** button that points to procurement, customers are just one click away from a direct connection to a Teams call queue or auto attendant.
 
 Learn more about joining your calling app to a Teams [call queue](./quickstarts/voice-video-calling/get-started-teams-call-queue.md) or [auto attendant](./quickstarts/voice-video-calling/get-started-teams-auto-attendant.md), and about [building contact center applications](./tutorials/contact-center.md).
 
@@ -269,13 +269,13 @@ When a customer creates an Azure Communication Services user identity, the user
 
 With the limited-access tokens, Azure Communication Services supports controlling full access versus limited access within chats and calls. Customers can control users' ability to initiate a new call or chat, as opposed to participating in existing calls or chats.
 
-These tokens solve the cold-call or cold-chat issue. For example, without limited-access tokens, a user who has a VoIP token can initiate calls and participate in calls. So theoretically, a defendant could call a judge directly or a patient could call a doctor directly. This is undesirable for most businesses. Developers can now give a limited-access token to a patient who then can join a call but can't initiate a direct call to anyone.
+These tokens solve the cold-call or cold-chat issue. For example, without limited-access tokens, a user who has a VoIP token can initiate calls and participate in calls. So theoretically, a defendant could call a judge directly or a patient could call a doctor directly. This situation is undesirable for most businesses. Developers can now give a limited-access token to a patient who then can join a call but can't initiate a direct call to anyone.
 
 For more information, see [Identity model](./concepts/identity-model.md).
 
 ### Try Phone Calling
 
-Try Phone Calling, now in preview, is a tool in Azure portal that helps customers confirm the setup of a telephony connection by making a phone call. It applies to both voice calling (PSTN) and direct routing. Try Phone Calling enables developers to quickly test Azure Communication Services calling capabilities, without an existing app or code on their end.
+Try Phone Calling, now in preview, is a tool in the Azure portal that helps customers confirm the setup of a telephony connection by making a phone call. It applies to both voice calling (PSTN) and direct routing. Try Phone Calling enables developers to quickly test Azure Communication Services calling capabilities, without an existing app or code on their end.
 
 :::image type="content" source="concepts/media/try-phone-calling.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Try Phone Calling tool in the Azure portal." lightbox="concepts/media/try-phone-calling.png":::