Fixes per Acrolinx

Author: stevenmatthew

articles/databox-gateway/data-box-gateway-2105-release-notes.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.author: shaas
 
 The following release notes identify the critical open issues and the resolved issues for the 2105 release of Azure Data Box Gateway.
 
-The release notes are continuously updated. As critical issues that require a workaround are discovered, they are added. Before you deploy your Azure Data Box Gateway, carefully review the information in the release notes.  
+The release notes are continuously updated. Critical issues that require a workaround are added as they're discovered. Before you deploy your Azure Data Box Gateway, carefully review the information in the release notes.  
 
 This release corresponds to the software version:
 
@@ -27,15 +27,15 @@ Update 2105 can be applied to all prior releases of Data Box Gateway.
 
 This release contains the following bug fix:
 
-- **Buffer overrun results in abrupt reboot of gateway** - This release fixes a bug that can cause a buffer overrun resulting in access of invalid memory, leading to an abrupt, unexpected reboot of the gateway device. The error can occur when a client accesses the last several bytes of a file whose data needs to be read back by the appliance from Azure, and the file size isn't a multiple of 4096 bytes.
+- **Buffer overrun results in abrupt reboot of gateway** - This release fixes a bug that can cause a buffer overrun resulting in access of invalid memory, leading to an abrupt, unexpected reboot of the gateway device. The error can occur when a client accesses the last several bytes of a file whose data needs to be read back by the appliance from Azure, and the file size isn't a multiple of 4,096 bytes.
 
 This release also contains the following updates:
 
 - All cumulative updates and .NET framework updates through April 2021.
 
 ## Known issues in this release
 
-No new issues are release noted for this release. All the release noted issues have carried over from the previous releases. To see a list of known issues, go to [Known issues in the GA release](data-box-gateway-release-notes.md#known-issues-in-ga-release).
+No new issues are release noted for this release. All release noted issues carry over from the previous releases. To see a list of known issues, go to [Known issues in the GA release](data-box-gateway-release-notes.md#known-issues-in-ga-release).
 
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