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Author: dominicbetts

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@@ -3,20 +3,29 @@ title: Quickstart - Configure rules and actions in Azure IoT Central
 description: This quickstart shows you how to configure telemetry-based rules and actions in your IoT Central application.
 author: dominicbetts
 ms.author: dobett
-ms.date: 06/10/2022
+ms.date: 09/26/2022
 ms.topic: quickstart
 ms.service: iot-central
 services: iot-central
 ms.custom: mvc, mode-other
+
+# Customer intent: As a new user of IoT Central, I want to learn how to use rules to notify me when a specific condition is detected on one of my device.
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 # Quickstart: Configure rules and actions for your device in Azure IoT Central
 
-In this quickstart, you create an IoT Central rule that sends an email when someone turns your phone over.
+Get started with IoT Central rules. In this quickstart you create a rule that sends an email when someone turns your phone over.
+
+In this quickstart, you:
+
+- Create a rule that detects when a telemetry value passes a threshold.
+- Configure the rule to notify you by email.
+- Use the smartphone app to test the rule.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-Before you begin, you should complete the previous quickstart [Connect your first device](./quick-deploy-iot-central.md). It shows you how to create an Azure IoT Central application and connect the **IoT Plug and Play** smartphone app to it.
+- An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free).
+- Complete the first quickstart [Create an Azure IoT Central application](./quick-deploy-iot-central.md).
 
 ## Create a telemetry-based rule
 
@@ -116,10 +125,7 @@ After your testing is complete, disable the rule to stop receiving the notificat
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this quickstart, you learned how to:
-
-* Create a telemetry-based rule
-* Add an action
+In this quickstart, you learned how to create a telemetry-based rule and add an action to it.
 
 To learn more about integrating your IoT Central application with other services, see:
 

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@@ -1,29 +1,37 @@
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 title: Quickstart - Connect a device to an Azure IoT Central application | Microsoft Docs
-description: Quickstart - Connect your first device to a new IoT Central application. This quickstart uses a smartphone app from either the Google Play or Apple app store as an IoT device.
+description: In this quickstart you learn how to connect your first device to a new IoT Central application. This quickstart uses a smartphone app from either the Google Play or Apple app store as an IoT device.
 author: dominicbetts
 ms.author: dobett
-ms.date: 06/22/2022
+ms.date: 09/26/2022
 ms.topic: quickstart
 ms.service: iot-central
 services: iot-central
 ms.custom: [mode-other, iot-central-frontdoor, contperf-fy22q4]
+
+# Customer intent: As a new user of IoT Central, I want to learn how to get started with an IoT Central application and an IoT device.
 ---
 
 # Quickstart - Use your smartphone as a device to send telemetry to an IoT Central application
 
-This quickstart shows you how to create an Azure IoT Central application and connect your first device. To get you started quickly, you install an app on your smartphone to act as the device. The app sends telemetry, reports properties, and responds to commands:
+Get started with an Azure IoT Central application and connect your first device. To get you started quickly, you install an app on your smartphone to act as the device. The app sends telemetry, reports properties, and responds to commands:
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/quick-deploy-iot-central/overview.png" alt-text="Overview of quickstart scenario connecting a smartphone app to IoT Central." border="false":::
 
+In this quickstart, you:
+
+- Create an IoT Central application.
+- Register a new device in the application.
+- Connect a device to the application and view the telemetry it sends.
+- Control the device from your application.
+
 ## Prerequisites
 
-An active Azure subscription. If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F) before you begin.
+- An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free).
 
-> [!TIP]
-> You should have at least **Contributor** access in your Azure subscription. If you created the subscription yourself, you're automatically an administrator with sufficient access. To learn more, see [What is Azure role-based access control?](../../role-based-access-control/overview.md)
+    You should have at least **Contributor** access in your Azure subscription. If you created the subscription yourself, you're automatically an administrator with sufficient access. To learn more, see [What is Azure role-based access control?](../../role-based-access-control/overview.md)
 
-An Android or iOS smartphone on which you're able to install a free app from one of the official app stores.
+- An Android or iOS smartphone on which you're able to install a free app from one of the official app stores.
 
 ## Create an application
 
@@ -65,7 +73,7 @@ To register your device:
 
 1. On the **Create a new device** page, accept the defaults, and then select **Create**.
 
-1. In the list of devices, click the device name:
+1. In the list of devices, click on the device name:
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/quick-deploy-iot-central/device-name.png" alt-text="A screenshot that shows the highlighted device name that you can select.":::
 
@@ -96,7 +104,7 @@ To view the telemetry from the smartphone app in IoT Central:
 
 1. In IoT Central, navigate to the **Devices** page.
 
-1. In the list of devices, click on your device name, then select **Overview**:
+1. In the list of devices, click on the device name, then select **Overview**:
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/quick-deploy-iot-central/iot-central-telemetry.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the overview page with telemetry plots.":::
 
@@ -119,7 +127,7 @@ To see the acknowledgment from the smartphone app, select **command history**.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this quickstart, you created an IoT Central application and connected device that sends telemetry. In this quickstart, you used a smartphone app as the IoT device that connects to IoT Central. Here's the suggested next step to continue learning about IoT Central:
+In this quickstart, you created an IoT Central application and connected device that sends telemetry. Then you used a smartphone app as the IoT device that connects to IoT Central. Here's the suggested next step to continue learning about IoT Central:
 
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
 > [Add a rule to your IoT Central application](./quick-configure-rules.md)

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@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: Quickstart - Export data from Azure IoT Central
 description: In this quickstart you learn how to use the data export feature in IoT Central to integrate with other cloud services.
 author: dominicbetts
 ms.author: dobett
-ms.date: 02/18/2022
+ms.date: 09/26/2022
 ms.topic: quickstart
 ms.service: iot-central
 services: iot-central