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Author: TimShererWithAquent

articles/app-service/configure-language-dotnet-framework.md

@@ -15,9 +15,9 @@ ms.author: cephalin
 > [!NOTE]
 > For ASP.NET Core, see [Configure an ASP.NET Core app for Azure App Service](configure-language-dotnetcore.md). If your ASP.NET app runs in a custom Windows or Linux container, see [Configure a custom container for Azure App Service](configure-custom-container.md).
 
-ASP.NET apps must be deployed to Azure App Service as compiled binaries. The Visual Studio publishing tool builds the solution and then deploys the compiled binaries directly, whereas the App Service deployment engine deploys the code repository first and then compiles the binaries.
+ASP.NET apps must be deployed to Azure App Service as compiled binaries. The Visual Studio publishing tool builds the solution and then deploys the compiled binaries directly. The App Service deployment engine deploys the code repository first and then compiles the binaries.
 
-This guide provides key concepts and instructions for ASP.NET developers. If you've never used Azure App Service, follow the [ASP.NET quickstart](./quickstart-dotnetcore.md?tabs=netframework48) and [ASP.NET with SQL Database tutorial](app-service-web-tutorial-dotnet-sqldatabase.md) first.
+This guide provides key concepts and instructions for ASP.NET developers. If this article is your first experience with Azure App Service, follow [Deploy an ASP.NET web app](./quickstart-dotnetcore.md?tabs=netframework48) and [Deploy an ASP.NET app with Azure SQL database to Azure](app-service-web-tutorial-dotnet-sqldatabase.md) first.
 
 ## Show supported .NET Framework runtime versions
 
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ For CLR 4 runtime versions (.NET Framework 4 and above):
 ls "D:\Program Files (x86)\Reference Assemblies\Microsoft\Framework\.NETFramework"
 ```
 
-Latest .NET Framework version may not be immediately available.
+Latest .NET Framework version might not be immediately available.
 
 For CLR 2 runtime versions (.NET Framework 3.5 and below):
 
@@ -81,15 +81,15 @@ If you configure an app setting with the same name in App Service and in *web.co
 
 ## Deploy multi-project solutions
 
-When a Visual Studio solution includes multiple projects, the Visual Studio publish process already includes selecting the project to deploy. When you deploy to the App Service deployment engine, such as with Git, or with ZIP deploy [with build automation enabled](deploy-zip.md#enable-build-automation-for-zip-deploy), the App Service deployment engine picks the first Web Site or Web Application Project it finds as the App Service app. You can specify which project App Service should use by specifying the `PROJECT` app setting. For example, run the following in the [Cloud Shell](https://shell.azure.com):
+When a Visual Studio solution includes multiple projects, the Visual Studio publish process already includes selecting the project to deploy. When you deploy to the App Service deployment engine, such as with Git, or with ZIP deploy [with build automation enabled](deploy-zip.md#enable-build-automation-for-zip-deploy), the App Service deployment engine picks the first Web Site or Web Application Project it finds as the App Service app. You can specify which project App Service should use by specifying the `PROJECT` app setting. For example, run the following command in the [Cloud Shell](https://shell.azure.com):
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az webapp config appsettings set --resource-group <resource-group-name> --name <app-name> --settings PROJECT="<project-name>/<project-name>.csproj"
 ```
 
 ## Get detailed exceptions page
 
-When your ASP.NET app generates an exception in the Visual Studio debugger, the browser displays a detailed exception page, but in App Service that page is replaced by a generic error message. To display the detailed exception page in App Service, open the *Web.config* file and add the `<customErrors mode="Off"/>` element under the `<system.web>` element. For example:
+When your ASP.NET app generates an exception in the Visual Studio debugger, the browser displays a detailed exception page. A generic error message replaces that page in App Service. To display the detailed exception page in App Service, open the *Web.config* file and add the `<customErrors mode="Off"/>` element under the `<system.web>` element. For example:
 
 ```xml
 <system.web>