Merge pull request #217838 from itechedit/six-sap-hana-database-articles

edit pass: six sap-hana-database articles

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/backup/azure-backup-architecture-for-sap-hana-backup.md

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ In the following sections you'll learn about different SAP HANA setups and their
 
 ### Backup architecture for database with HANA System Replication (preview)
 
-The backup service resides in both the physical nodes of the HSR setup. Once you confirm that these nodes are in a replication group (using the [pre-registration script](sap-hana-database-with-hana-system-replication-backup.md#run-the-pre-registration-script)), Azure Backup groups the nodes logically, and creates a single backup item during protection configuration. 
+The backup service resides in both the physical nodes of the HSR setup. Once you confirm that these nodes are in a replication group (using the [pre-registration script](sap-hana-database-with-hana-system-replication-backup.md#run-the-preregistration-script)), Azure Backup groups the nodes logically, and creates a single backup item during protection configuration. 
 
 After configuration, Azure Backup accepts backup requests from the primary node. On failover,  when the new primary node starts generating log backup requests, Azure Backup compares the new log backups with the existing chain from the older primary node.
 

articles/backup/sap-hana-database-about.md

@@ -13,46 +13,44 @@ ms.custom: include file
 
 ## Create a Recovery Services vault
 
-A Recovery Services vault is a management entity that stores recovery points created over time and provides an interface to perform backup-related operations. These operations include taking on-demand backups, performing restores, and creating backup policies.
+A Recovery Services vault is a management entity that stores recovery points that are created over time, and it provides an interface to perform backup-related operations. These operations include taking on-demand backups, performing restores, and creating backup policies.
 
 To create a Recovery Services vault:
 
-1. Sign in to your subscription in the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
+1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
-1. Search for **Backup center** in the Azure portal, and go to the **Backup Center** dashboard.
+1. Search for **Backup center**, and then go to the **Backup center** dashboard.
 
-    ![Screenshot that shows searching for and selecting Backup Center.](../includes/media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-search-backup-center.png)
+    ![Screenshot that shows where to search for and select 'Backup center'.](../includes/media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-search-backup-center.png)
 
-1. Select **+Vault** from the **Overview** tab.
+1. On the **Overview** pane, select **Vault**.
 
-    ![Screenshot of the button for creating a vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-create-vault.png) 
+    ![Screenshot of the button for creating a Recovery Services vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-create-vault.png) 
 
 1. Select **Recovery Services vault** > **Continue**.
 
-    ![Screenshot that shows choosing Recovery Services as the vault type.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-select-recovery-services-vault.png) 
+    ![Screenshot that shows where to select Recovery Services as the vault type.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-select-recovery-services-vault.png) 
 
-1. The **Recovery Services vault** dialog opens. Provide the following values:    
+1. On the **Recovery Services vault** pane, enter the following values:
 
-   - **Subscription**: Choose the subscription to use. If you're a member of only one subscription, you'll see that name. If you're not sure which subscription to use, use the default (suggested) subscription. There are multiple choices only if your work or school account is associated with more than one Azure subscription.
-   - **Resource group**: Use an existing resource group or create a new one. To see the list of available resource groups in your subscription, select **Use existing**, and then select a resource from the dropdown list. To create a new resource group, select **Create new** and enter the name. For more information about resource groups, see [Azure Resource Manager overview](../articles/azure-resource-manager/management/overview.md).
+   - **Subscription**: Select the subscription to use. If you're a member of only one subscription, you'll see that name. If you're not sure which subscription to use, use the default subscription. There are multiple choices only if your work or school account is associated with more than one Azure subscription.
+   - **Resource group**: Use an existing resource group or create a new one. To view a list of available resource groups in your subscription, select **Use existing**, and then select a resource in the dropdown list. To create a new resource group, select **Create new**, and then enter the name. For more information about resource groups, see [Azure Resource Manager overview](../articles/azure-resource-manager/management/overview.md).
    - **Vault name**: Enter a friendly name to identify the vault. The name must be unique to the Azure subscription. Specify a name that has at least 2 but not more than 50 characters. The name must start with a letter and consist only of letters, numbers, and hyphens.
    - **Region**: Select the geographic region for the vault. For you to create a vault to help protect any data source, the vault *must* be in the same region as the data source.
 
       > [!IMPORTANT]
-      > If you're not sure of the location of your data source, close the dialog. Go to the list of your resources in the portal. If you have data sources in multiple regions, create a Recovery Services vault for each region. Create the vault in the first location before you create the vault for another location. There's no need to specify storage accounts to store the backup data. The Recovery Services vault and Azure Backup handle that automatically.
-      >
-      >
-
-    ![Screenshot that shows boxes for configuring a Recovery Services vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-add-vault-details.png)
+      > If you're not sure of the location of your data source, close the window. Go to the list of your resources in the portal. If you have data sources in multiple regions, create a Recovery Services vault for each region. Create the vault in the first location before you create a vault in another location. There's no need to specify storage accounts to store the backup data. The Recovery Services vault and Azure Backup handle that automatically.
+      
+    ![Screenshot that shows fields for configuring a Recovery Services vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/backup-center-add-vault-details.png)
 
 1. After you provide the values, select **Review + create**.
 
-    ![Screenshot that shows the Review + create button in the process for creating a Recovery Services vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/review-and-create.png)
+    ![Screenshot that shows the 'Review + create' button for creating a Recovery Services vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/review-and-create.png)
 
-1. When you're ready to create the Recovery Services vault, select **Create**.
+1. When you're ready to finish creating the Recovery Services vault, select **Create**.
 
-    ![Screenshot that shows the final Create button for creating the Recovery Services vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/click-create-button.png)
+    ![Screenshot that shows the final 'Create' button for creating the Recovery Services vault.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/click-create-button.png)
 
-1. It can take a while to create the Recovery Services vault. Monitor the status notifications in the **Notifications** area at the upper-right corner of the portal. After your vault is created, it's visible in the list of Recovery Services vaults. If you don't see your vault, select **Refresh**.
+    It can take a while to create the Recovery Services vault. Monitor the status notifications in the **Notifications** area at the upper right. After your vault is created, it's visible in the list of Recovery Services vaults. If your vault isn't displayed, select **Refresh**.
 
     ![Screenshot that shows the button for refreshing the list of backup vaults.](./media/backup-create-rs-vault/refresh-button.png)