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Author: jay98014

articles/active-directory/authentication/howto-password-ban-bad-on-premises-deploy.md

@@ -102,8 +102,8 @@ There are two required installers for Azure AD password protection. They're avai
 1. Choose one or more servers to host the proxy service for password protection.
    * Each such service can only provide password policies for a single forest. The host machine must be joined to a domain in that forest. Root and child domains are both supported. You need network connectivity between at least one DC in each domain of the forest and the password protection machine.
    * You can run the proxy service on a domain controller for testing. But that domain controller then requires internet connectivity, which can be a security concern. We recommend this configuration for testing only.
-   * It is not supported to run the proxy service on a read-only domain controller.
    * We recommend at least two proxy servers for redundancy. See [High availability](howto-password-ban-bad-on-premises-deploy.md#high-availability).
+   * It is not supported to run the proxy service on a read-only domain controller.
 
 1. Install the  Azure AD Password Protection Proxy service using the `AzureADPasswordProtectionProxySetup.exe` software installer.
    * The software installation does not require a reboot. The software installation may be automated using standard MSI procedures, for example:
@@ -131,11 +131,11 @@ There are two required installers for Azure AD password protection. They're avai
 
      `Register-AzureADPasswordProtectionProxy`
 
-     This cmdlet requires global administrator credentials for your Azure tenant. You also need on-premises Active Directory domain administrator privileges in the forest root domain. You must also run this cmdlet using an account with local administrator privileges.
+     This cmdlet requires global administrator credentials for your Azure tenant. You also need on-premises Active Directory domain administrator privileges in the forest root domain. This cmdlet must also be run using an account with local administrator privileges.
 
      After this command succeeds once for a proxy service, additional invocations of it will succeed but are unnecessary.
 
-      The `Register-AzureADPasswordProtectionProxy` cmdlet supports the following three authentication modes. The first two modes support Azure Multi-Factor Authentication but the third mode does not. Please see comments below for more details.
+      The `Register-AzureADPasswordProtectionProxy` cmdlet supports the following three authentication modes. The first two modes support Azure Multi-Factor Authentication but the third mode does not. See comments below for more details.
 
      * Interactive authentication mode:
 
@@ -177,11 +177,11 @@ There are two required installers for Azure AD password protection. They're avai
    > There might be a noticeable delay before completion the first time that this cmdlet is run for a specific Azure tenant. Unless a failure is reported, don't worry about this delay.
 
 1. Register the forest.
-   * You must initialize the on-premises Active Directory forest with the necessary credentials to communicate with Azure by using the `Register-AzureADPasswordProtectionForest` PowerShell cmdlet.
+   * Initialize the on-premises Active Directory forest with the necessary credentials to communicate with Azure by using the `Register-AzureADPasswordProtectionForest` PowerShell cmdlet.
 
       The cmdlet requires global administrator credentials for your Azure tenant.  You must also run this cmdlet using an account with local administrator privileges. It also requires on-premises Active Directory Enterprise Administrator privileges. This step is run once per forest.
 
-      The `Register-AzureADPasswordProtectionForest` cmdlet supports the following three authentication modes. The first two modes support Azure Multi-Factor Authentication but the third mode does not. Please see comments below for more details.
+      The `Register-AzureADPasswordProtectionForest` cmdlet supports the following three authentication modes. The first two modes support Azure Multi-Factor Authentication but the third mode does not. See comments below for more details.
 
      * Interactive authentication mode:
 
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ There are two required installers for Azure AD password protection. They're avai
    The proxy service doesn't support the use of specific credentials for connecting to an HTTP proxy.
 
 1. Optional: Configure the proxy service for password protection to listen on a specific port.
-   * The DC Agent software for password protection on the domain controllers uses RPC over TCP to communicate with the proxy service. By default, the proxy service listens on any available dynamic RPC endpoint. But you can configure the service to listen on a specific TCP port, if this is necessary because of networking topology or firewall requirements in your environment.
+   * The DC Agent software for password protection on the domain controllers uses RPC over TCP to communicate with the proxy service. By default, the proxy service listens on any available dynamic RPC endpoint. You can configure the service to listen on a specific TCP port, if necessary due to networking topology or firewall requirements in your environment.
       * <a id="static" /></a>To configure the service to run under a static port, use the `Set-AzureADPasswordProtectionProxyConfiguration` cmdlet.
 
          ```powershell
@@ -342,6 +342,8 @@ There are no additional requirements to deploy Azure AD password protection acro
 
 Password changes/sets are not processed and persisted on read-only domain controllers (RODCs). They are forwarded to writable domain controllers. So, you don't have to install the DC Agent software on RODCs.
 
+It is not supported to run the proxy service on a read-only domain controller.
+
 ## High availability
 
 The main availability concern for password protection is the availability of proxy servers when the domain controllers in a forest try to download new policies or other data from Azure. Each DC Agent uses a simple round-robin-style algorithm when deciding which proxy server to call. The Agent skips proxy servers that aren't responding. For most fully connected Active Directory deployments that have healthy replication of both directory and sysvol folder state, two proxy servers is enough to ensure availability. This results in timely download of new policies and other data. But you can deploy additional proxy servers.