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articles/iot-central/core/how-to-connect-iot-edge-transparent-gateway.md

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 IoT Edge supports the [*transparent* and *translation* gateway patterns](../../iot-edge/iot-edge-as-gateway.md). This article summarizes how to implement the transparent gateway pattern. In this pattern, the gateway passes messages from the downstream device through to the IoT Hub endpoint in your IoT Central application. The gateway does not manipulate the messages as they pass through. In IoT Central, each downstream device appears as child to the gateway device:
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/how-to-connect-iot-edge-transparent-gateway/edgewithdownstreamdeviceidentity.png" alt-text="IoT Edge as a transparent gateway." border="false":::
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 For simplicity, this article uses virtual machines to host the downstream and gateway devices. In a real scenario, the downstream device and gateway would run on physical devices on your local network.
 

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 # Tutorial: Deploy and walk through a connected logistics application template
 
+Use the application template and guidance in this article to develop an end-to-end *connected logistics solution*.
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+:::image type="content" source="media/tutorial-iot-central-connected-logistics/connected-logistics-architecture.png" alt-text="Connected logistics dashboard." border="false":::
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+1. IoT tags send telemetry data to a gateway device.
+2. Gateway devices send telemetry and aggregated insights to IoT Central.
+3. IoT Central routes data to an Azure service for manipulation.
+4. Services such as Azure Stream Analytics or Azure Functions can reformat data streams and send the data to storage accounts.
+5. End-user business applications can power business workflows.
+
+*IoT tags* provide physical, ambient, and environmental sensor capabilities such as temperature, humidity, shock, tilt, and light. IoT tags typically connect to gateway device through Zigbee (802.15.4). Tags are less expensive sensors and can be discarded at the end of a typical logistics journey to avoid challenges with reverse logistics.
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+*Gateways* enable upstream Azure IoT cloud connectivity using cellular or Wi-Fi channels.  Bluetooth, NFC, and 802.15.4 Wireless Sensor Network modes are used for downstream communication with IoT tags. Gateways provide end-to-end secure cloud connectivity, IoT tag pairing, sensor data aggregation, data retention, and the ability to configure alarm thresholds.
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+Azure IoT Central is a solution development platform that simplifies IoT device connectivity, configuration, and management. The platform significantly reduces the burden and costs of IoT device management, operations, and related developments. You can build end-to-end enterprise solutions to achieve a digital feedback loop in logistics.
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+The IoT Central platform provides rich extensibility options through data export and APIs. Business insights based on telemetry data processing or raw telemetry are typically exported to a preferred line-of-business application.
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 This tutorial shows you how to get started with the IoT Central *connected logistics* application template. You'll learn how to deploy and use the template.
 
 In this tutorial, you learn how to: