Merge pull request #263433 from kgremban/jan8-logicapps

Review logic apps tutorial

Author: v-regandowner

articles/iot-hub/TOC.yml

@@ -47,9 +47,13 @@
       - name: Visualize data in Power BI
         displayName: Stream Analytics
         href: iot-hub-live-data-visualization-in-power-bi.md
-      - name: Visualize data in an App Service web app
+      - name: Visualize data in App Service web apps
         displayName: Node.js
         href: iot-hub-live-data-visualization-in-web-apps.md
+      - name: Monitor and notify with Logic Apps
+        displayName: Service Bus, queue, namespace
+        href: iot-hub-monitoring-notifications-with-azure-logic-apps.md
+
 - name: Concepts
   items:
     - name: IoT Hub concepts overview
@@ -435,10 +439,6 @@
             - name: Raspberry Pi with C
               displayName: BME280 sensor
               href: iot-hub-raspberry-pi-kit-c-get-started.md
-    - name: Extended IoT scenarios
-      items:
-        - name: Remote monitoring and notifications with Logic Apps
-          href: iot-hub-monitoring-notifications-with-azure-logic-apps.md
     - name: Troubleshoot and problem solution
       items:
         - name: Troubleshoot device connectivity

articles/iot-hub/iot-hub-monitoring-notifications-with-azure-logic-apps.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.custom: ['Role: Cloud Development']
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-get-started-device-selector](../../includes/iot-hub-get-started-device-selector.md)]
 
-In this tutorial, you begin by learning the basics of working with Raspberry Pi that's running Raspberry Pi OS. You then learn how to seamlessly connect your devices to the cloud by using [Azure IoT Hub](about-iot-hub.md). For Windows 10 IoT Core samples, go to the [Windows Dev Center](https://www.windowsondevices.com/).
+In this article, you learn the basics of working with Raspberry Pi that's running Raspberry Pi OS. You then learn how to connect your devices to the cloud by using [Azure IoT Hub](about-iot-hub.md). For Windows 10 IoT Core samples, go to the [Windows Dev Center](https://www.windowsondevices.com/).
 
 Don't have a kit yet? Try [Raspberry Pi online simulator](iot-hub-raspberry-pi-web-simulator-get-started.md). Or buy a new kit [here](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot/starter-kits).
 

articles/iot-hub/iot-hub-raspberry-pi-kit-c-get-started.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.custom: ['Role: Cloud Development', devx-track-js]
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-get-started-device-selector](../../includes/iot-hub-get-started-device-selector.md)]
 
-In this tutorial, you begin by learning the basics of working with Raspberry Pi that's running Raspberry Pi OS. You then learn how to seamlessly connect your devices to the cloud by using [Azure IoT Hub](about-iot-hub.md). For Windows 10 IoT Core samples, go to the [Windows Dev Center](https://www.windowsondevices.com/).
+In this article, you learn the basics of working with Raspberry Pi that's running Raspberry Pi OS. You then learn how to seamlessly connect your devices to the cloud by using [Azure IoT Hub](about-iot-hub.md). For Windows 10 IoT Core samples, go to the [Windows Dev Center](https://www.windowsondevices.com/).
 
 Don't have a kit yet? Try [Raspberry Pi online simulator](iot-hub-raspberry-pi-web-simulator-get-started.md). Or buy a new kit [here](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot/starter-kits).
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Prepare the microSD card for installation of the Raspberry Pi OS image.
 
    c. Select the microSD card drive. Etcher may have already selected the correct drive.
 
-   d. Click Flash to install Raspberry Pi OS with desktop to the microSD card.
+   d. Select Flash to install Raspberry Pi OS with desktop to the microSD card.
 
    e. Remove the microSD card from your computer when installation is complete. It's safe to remove the microSD card directly because Etcher automatically ejects or unmounts the microSD card upon completion.
 
@@ -112,16 +112,16 @@ Prepare the microSD card for installation of the Raspberry Pi OS image.
 
 2. Start Pi and then sign into Raspberry Pi OS by using `pi` as the user name and `raspberry` as the password.
 
-3. Click the Raspberry icon > **Preferences** > **Raspberry Pi Configuration**.
+3. Select the Raspberry icon > **Preferences** > **Raspberry Pi Configuration**.
 
    ![The Raspberry Pi OS with Preferences menu](./media/iot-hub-raspberry-pi-kit-node-get-started/1-raspbian-preferences-menu.png)
 
-4. On the **Interfaces** tab, set **SSH** and **I2C** to **Enable**, and then click **OK**. 
+4. On the **Interfaces** tab, set **SSH** and **I2C** to **Enable**, and then select **OK**. 
 
     | Interface | Description |
     | --------- | ----------- |
     | *SSH* | Secure Shell (SSH) is used to remote into the Raspberry Pi with a remote command-line. This is the preferred method for issuing the commands to your Raspberry Pi remotely in this document. |
-    | *I2C* | Inter-integrated Circuit (I2C) is a communications protocol used to interface with hardware such as sensors. This interface is required for interfacing with physical sensors in this topic.|
+    | *I2C* | Inter-integrated Circuit (I2C) is a communications protocol used to interface with hardware such as sensors. This interface is required for interfacing with physical sensors in this article.|
 
     If you don't have physical sensors and want to use simulated sensor data from your Raspberry Pi device, you can leave **I2C** disabled.
 
@@ -142,14 +142,14 @@ For sensor pins, use the following wiring:
 
 | Start (Sensor & LED)     | End (Board)            | Cable Color   |
 | -----------------------  | ---------------------- | ------------: |
-| VDD (Pin 5G)             | 3.3V PWR (Pin 1)       | White cable   |
+| VDD (Pin 5G)             | 3.3 V PWR (Pin 1)       | White cable   |
 | GND (Pin 7G)             | GND (Pin 6)            | Brown cable   |
 | SDI (Pin 10G)            | I2C1 SDA (Pin 3)       | Red cable     |
 | SCK (Pin 8G)             | I2C1 SCL (Pin 5)       | Orange cable  |
 | LED VDD (Pin 18F)        | GPIO 24 (Pin 18)       | White cable   |
 | LED GND (Pin 17F)        | GND (Pin 20)           | Black cable   |
 
-Click to view [Raspberry Pi 2 & 3 pin mappings](/windows/iot-core/learn-about-hardware/pinmappings/pinmappingsrpi) for your reference.
+For more information, see [Raspberry Pi 2 & 3 pin mappings](/windows/iot-core/learn-about-hardware/pinmappings/pinmappingsrpi).
 
 After you've successfully connected BME280 to your Raspberry Pi, it should be like below image.
 
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ Turn on Pi by using the micro USB cable and the power supply. Use the Ethernet c
    node -v
    ```
 
-   If the version is lower than 10.x, or if there is no Node.js on your Pi, install the latest version.
+   If the version is lower than 10.x, or if Node.js isn't on your Pi, install the latest version.
 
    ```bash
    curl -sSL https://deb.nodesource.com/setup_16.x | sudo -E bash
@@ -255,14 +255,14 @@ For more ways to process data sent by your device, continue on to the next secti
 
 ## Clean up resources
 
-You can use the resources created in this topic with other tutorials and quickstarts in this document set. If you plan to continue on to work with other quickstarts or with the tutorials, do not clean up the resources created in this topic. If you do not plan to continue, use the following steps to delete all resources created by this topic in the Azure portal.
+You can use the resources created in this article with other tutorials and quickstarts in this document set. If you plan to continue on to work with other quickstarts or with the tutorials, don't clean up the resources created in this article. If you don't plan to continue, use the following steps to delete all resources created by this article in the Azure portal.
 
 1. From the left-hand menu in the Azure portal, select **All resources** and then select the IoT Hub you created. 
-1. At the top of the IoT Hub overview pane, click **Delete**.
-1. Enter your hub name and click **Delete** again to confirm permanently deleting the IoT hub.
+1. At the top of the IoT Hub overview pane, select **Delete**.
+1. Enter your hub name and select **Delete** again to confirm permanently deleting the IoT hub.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-You've run a sample application to collect sensor data and send it to your IoT hub.
+In this article, you ran a sample application to collect sensor data and send it to your IoT hub.
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-get-started-next-steps](../../includes/iot-hub-get-started-next-steps.md)]

articles/iot-hub/iot-hub-raspberry-pi-kit-node-get-started.md

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ ms.custom: ['Role: Cloud Development', devx-track-js]
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-get-started-device-selector](../../includes/iot-hub-get-started-device-selector.md)]
 
-In this tutorial, you begin by learning the basics of working with Raspberry Pi online simulator. You then learn how to seamlessly connect the Pi simulator to the cloud by using [Azure IoT Hub](about-iot-hub.md).
+In this article, you learn the basics of working with Raspberry Pi online simulator. You then learn how to seamlessly connect the Pi simulator to the cloud by using [Azure IoT Hub](about-iot-hub.md).
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/iot-hub-raspberry-pi-web-simulator/3-banner.png" alt-text="Connect Raspberry Pi web simulator to Azure IoT Hub" border="false":::