PR review feedback

Author: Tyler Whitney

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@@ -17,13 +17,14 @@ ms.reviwer: hahamil
 ms.custom: aaddev, identityplatformtop40
 ms.collection: M365-identity-device-management
 ---
+
+# Shared device mode for Android devices
+
 > [!NOTE]
 > This feature is in public preview.
 > This preview version is provided without a service level agreement, and it's not recommended for production workloads. Certain features might not be supported or might have constrained capabilities.
 > For more information, see [Supplemental Terms of Use for Microsoft Azure Previews](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/).
 
-# Shared device mode for Android devices
-
 Firstline workers, such as retail associates, flight crew members, and field service workers, often use a shared mobile device to do their work. That becomes problematic when they start sharing passwords or pin numbers to access customer and business data on the shared device.
 
 Shared device mode allows you to configure an Android device so that it can be easily shared by multiple employees. Employees can sign in and access customer information quickly. When they are finished with their shift or task, they can sign out of the device and it will be immediately ready for the next employee to use.
@@ -106,4 +107,4 @@ The following diagram shows the overall app lifecycle and common events that may
 
 ## Next steps
 
-See the [shared device sign-out sample](https://github.com/brandwe/GlobalSignoutSample) for shared device mode app example code that shows how to write a firstline worker app that runs on a shared mode Android device.
+Try the [Use shared-device mode in your Android application](tutorial-v2-shared-device-mode.md) tutorial that shows how to run a firstline worker app on a shared mode Android device.

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@@ -18,13 +18,14 @@ ms.reviewer: brandwe
 ms.custom: aaddev, identityplatformtop40
 ms.collection: M365-identity-device-management
 ---
+
+# Tutorial: Use shared-device mode in your Android application
+
 > [!NOTE]
 > This feature is in public preview.
 > This preview version is provided without a service level agreement, and it's not recommended for production workloads. Certain features might not be supported or might have constrained capabilities.
 > For more information, see [Supplemental Terms of Use for Microsoft Azure Previews](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/).
 
-# Tutorial: Use shared-device mode in your Android application
-
 ## Developer guide
 
 This guide provides developer guidance to implement shared-device mode in an Android application using the Microsoft Authentication Library (MSAL). See the [MSAL Android tutorial](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/active-directory/develop/tutorial-v2-android) to see how to integrate MSAL with your Android app, sign in a user, call Microsoft graph, and sign out a user.
@@ -209,7 +210,7 @@ For information on how to do this, refer to [Register your application](https://
 > When you register your app, please use the quickstart guide on the left-hand side and then select **Android**. This will lead you to a page where you'll be asked to provide the **Package Name** and **Signature Hash** for your app. These are very important to ensure your app configuration will work. You'll then receive a configuration object that you can use for your app that you'll cut and paste into your auth_config.json file.
 
 ![App registration screen](media/tutorial-v2-shared-device-mode/register-app.png)
-You should select **Make this change for me** and then provide the values the QuickStart asks for in the Azure portal. When that's done, we will generate all the configuration files you need.
+You should select **Make this change for me** and then provide the values the quickstart asks for in the Azure portal. When that's done, we will generate all the configuration files you need.
 
 ![App config info screen](media/tutorial-v2-shared-device-mode/config-info.png)
 
@@ -253,6 +254,8 @@ The device is now in shared mode.
 
 Once you’ve put a device in shared-mode, it becomes known to your organization and is tracked in your organizational tenant. You can view your shared devices by looking at the **Join Type** in the Azure Active Directory blade of your Azure portal.
 
+![All devices blade in the Azure portal](media/tutorial-v2-shared-device-mode/registered-device-screen.png)
+
 ## Running the sample app
 
 The Sample Application is a simple app that will call the Graph API of your organization. n first run you’ll be prompted to consent as the application is new to your employee account.