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Author: whhender

articles/purview/how-to-link-azure-data-factory.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ ms.author: jingwang
 ms.service: purview
 ms.subservice: purview-data-catalog
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 11/01/2021
+ms.date: 12/05/2022
 ---
 # How to connect Azure Data Factory and Microsoft Purview
 
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Follow the steps below to connect an existing data factory to your Microsoft Pur
 
     Some Data Factory instances might be disabled if the data factory is already connected to the current Microsoft Purview account, or the data factory doesn't have a managed identity.
 
-    A warning message will be displayed if any of the selected Data Factories are already connected to other Microsoft Purview account. By selecting OK, the Data Factory connection with the other Microsoft Purview account will be disconnected. No additional confirmations are required.
+    A warning message will be displayed if any of the selected Data Factories are already connected to other Microsoft Purview account. When you select OK, the Data Factory connection with the other Microsoft Purview account will be disconnected. No other confirmations are required.
 
     :::image type="content" source="./media/how-to-link-azure-data-factory/warning-for-disconnect-factory.png" alt-text="Screenshot showing warning to disconnect Azure Data Factory.":::
 
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ Follow the steps below to connect an existing data factory to your Microsoft Pur
 
 ### How authentication works
 
-Data factory's managed identity is used to authenticate lineage push operations from data factory to Microsoft Purview. When connecting data factory to Microsoft Purview on UI, it adds the role assignment automatically.
+Data factory's managed identity is used to authenticate lineage push operations from data factory to Microsoft Purview. When you connect your data factory to Microsoft Purview on UI, it adds the role assignment automatically.
 
 Grant the data factory's managed identity **Data Curator** role on Microsoft Purview **root collection**. Learn more about [Access control in Microsoft Purview](../purview/catalog-permissions.md) and [Add roles and restrict access through collections](../purview/how-to-create-and-manage-collections.md#add-roles-and-restrict-access-through-collections).
 
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ An example of this pattern would be the following:
 
 ### Data movement with 1:1 lineage and wildcard support
 
-Another common scenario for capturing lineage, is using a wildcard to copy files from a single input dataset to a single output dataset. The wildcard allows the copy activity to match multiple files for copying using a common portion of the file name. Microsoft Purview captures file-level lineage for each individual file copied by the corresponding copy activity.
+Another common scenario for capturing lineage is using a wildcard to copy files from a single input dataset to a single output dataset. The wildcard allows the copy activity to match multiple files for copying using a common portion of the file name. Microsoft Purview captures file-level lineage for each individual file copied by the corresponding copy activity.
 
 An example of this pattern would be the following: