edit pass: azure-dev-tools-teaching

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/about-program.md

@@ -10,8 +10,7 @@ ms.service: azure-education
 
 # What is Azure Dev Tools for Teaching?
 
-Microsoft Azure Dev Tools for Teaching puts professional developer tools,
-software, and services from Microsoft in the hands of faculty and students. Plans in the program are part of various academic Volume Licensing agreements.
+Azure Dev Tools for Teaching puts professional developer tools, software, and services from Microsoft in the hands of faculty and students. Plans in the program are part of various academic Volume Licensing agreements.
 
 Students receive developer tools at no cost--everything they need to create apps, games, and websites. With this access, students can chase their dreams, create the next breakthrough in technology, or get a head start on their career.
 
@@ -26,13 +25,11 @@ We designed Azure Dev Tools for Teaching to help professors teach and help stude
 
 Your Azure Dev Tools for Teaching subscription gives you access to certain software developer tools. These tools are available to download for free. If you're a faculty member who is enrolled in an approved course, you're eligible to install Azure Dev Tools for Teaching software on your computer for noncommercial use.
 
-Azure Dev Tools for Teaching is available in more than 140 countries/regions where Azure is commercially available. The Education Hub Store is available in the following languages: Arabic, Chinese Simplified, Chinese Traditional, Danish, Dutch, English, French, German, Hebrew, Italian, Japanese, Korean, Portuguese, Russian, Spanish, Swedish, and Turkish.
-
-## Student benefits
+Students don't need to sign up for an Azure subscription to get their software benefits. Microsoft offers USD$100 in Azure credit for students, along with access to free Azure services. Students can sign up for the [Azure for Students offer](azure-students-program.md) without needing a credit card.
 
-Students don't need to sign up for an Azure subscription to access their software benefits. Microsoft offers USD$100 in Azure credit, plus access to free Azure services for students. Students can sign up for the [Azure for Students offer](azure-students-program.md) without needing a credit card.
+The [Azure Education Hub](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/devtools) houses all products and services that are available to academic users. The Education Hub is built into the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/). Students access software by signing in to the Azure portal with the same credentials that they use to access their Imagine subscription.
 
-Software is accessible through an [Education Hub](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/devtools) that houses all products and services that are available to academic users. The Education Hub is built into the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/). Students access software by signing in to the Azure portal with the same credentials that they use to access their Imagine subscription.
+Azure Dev Tools for Teaching is available in more than 140 countries/regions where Azure is commercially available. The Education Hub Store is available in the following languages: Arabic, Chinese Simplified, Chinese Traditional, Danish, Dutch, English, French, German, Hebrew, Italian, Japanese, Korean, Portuguese, Russian, Spanish, Swedish, and Turkish.
 
 ## Eligibility to purchase Azure Dev Tools for Teaching
 

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/azure-students-program.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Through the Azure Dev Tools for Teaching program, students who have a current an
 
 Azure for Students gives you a $100 credit for 12 months. It includes access to more than 25 free services, including compute, network, storage, and databases. Any charges that you incur during this period are deducted from the credit. You can see your remaining credit on the [Azure Sponsorships portal](https://www.microsoftazuresponsorships.com/).
 
-After you exhaust your available credit or reach the end of 12 months, your Azure subscription is disabled. If you reach the end of your 12 months and are still a student, you can renew your Azure for Students offer. We'll notify you shortly before your 12-month anniversary to let you know how to renew.
+After you exhaust your available credit or reach the end of 12 months, your Azure subscription is canceled. If you reach the end of your 12 months and are still a student, you can renew your Azure for Students offer. We'll notify you shortly before your 12-month anniversary to let you know how to renew.
 
 If your student status is no longer valid after the offer expires, you can't renew. In such a case, if you want to keep using Azure services, you can upgrade to a pay-as-you-go subscription in the Azure portal.
 

articles/education-hub/azure-dev-tools-teaching/program-faq.yml

@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ sections:
   - name: Azure Dev Tools for Teaching
     questions:
       - question: |
-          Who is eligible to purchase Microsoft Azure Dev Tools for Teaching?
+          Who is eligible to purchase Azure Dev Tools for Teaching?
         answer: |
           Only academic institutions that have purchased a Volume Licensing agreement with Microsoft can enroll in Azure Dev Tools for Teaching.
 
@@ -298,12 +298,12 @@ sections:
       - question: |
           Does Azure Dev Tools for Teaching include Microsoft Office?
         answer: |
-          No. The focus of Microsoft Azure Dev Tools for Teaching is to provide departments, faculty, and students with the necessary tools to expand their study of software development and testing. We provide technologies such as Windows Server, Visual Studio .NET, SQL Server, and the Platform SDK.
+          No. The focus of Azure Dev Tools for Teaching is to provide departments, faculty, and students with the necessary tools to expand their study of software development and testing. We provide technologies such as Windows Server, Visual Studio .NET, SQL Server, and the Platform SDK.
 
       - question: |
           Does Azure Dev Tools for Teaching include Azure credit?
         answer: |
-          No, your Microsoft Azure Dev Tools for Teaching subscription doesn't include Azure credit. But you can sign up for Azure for Students, which gives you $100 worth of Azure credit that you can use to pay for Azure services. For more information, go to the [Azure for Students home page](https://aka.ms/student).
+          No, your Azure Dev Tools for Teaching subscription doesn't include Azure credit. But you can sign up for Azure for Students, which gives you $100 worth of Azure credit that you can use to pay for Azure services. For more information, go to the [Azure for Students home page](https://aka.ms/student).
           
       - question: |
           Do students need an Office 365 or Active Directory account to access Azure Dev Tools for Teaching?
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ sections:
           - Campus Agreement
           - School Agreement
           
-          You must enroll in Azure Dev Tools for Teaching by using the appropriate promotional codes from the subscription welcome email that you receive for your academic volume license.
+          You must enroll in Azure Dev Tools for Teaching by using the appropriate promotional code from the subscription welcome email that you receive for your academic volume license.
           
           You must also renew your subscription when it expires. It doesn't renew automatically.
           

includes/edu-dev-tools-program-support.md

@@ -8,4 +8,4 @@ ms.date: 06/30/2020
 ms.service: azure
 ---
 
-If you need help with signing in, setting up, or using Azure Dev Tools for Teaching, go to [Plans Support](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/institutions/Contact) and locate your region.
+If you need help with signing in to, setting up, or using Azure Dev Tools for Teaching, go to [Plans Support](https://azureforeducation.microsoft.com/institutions/Contact) and locate your region.