edit pass: status-monitor-v2-articles-batch2

Author: v-albemi

articles/azure-monitor/app/status-monitor-v2-api-enable-monitoring.md

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ This article describes a cmdlet that's a member of the [Az.ApplicationMonitor Po
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > Status Monitor v2 is currently in public preview.
-> This preview version is provided without a service-level agreement, and we don't recommended it for production workloads. Some features might not be supported, and some might have constrained capabilities.
+> This preview version is provided without a service-level agreement, and we don't recommend it for production workloads. Some features might not be supported, and some might have constrained capabilities.
 > For more information, see [Supplemental Terms of Use for Microsoft Azure Previews](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/).
 
 ## Description
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ The instrumentation engine adds overhead and is off by default.
 **Optional.** Use this switch to accept the license and privacy statement in headless installations.
 
 ### -Verbose
-**Common parameter.** Use this switch to output detailed logs.
+**Common parameter.** Use this switch to display detailed logs.
 
 ### -WhatIf 
 **Common parameter.** Use this switch to test and validate your input parameters without actually enabling monitoring.
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ Successfully enabled Application Insights Status Monitor
   View your telemetry:
  - [Explore metrics](../../azure-monitor/app/metrics-explorer.md) to monitor performance and usage.
 - [Search events and logs](../../azure-monitor/app/diagnostic-search.md) to diagnose problems.
-- Use [analytics](../../azure-monitor/app/analytics.md) for more advanced queries.
+- [Use Analytics](../../azure-monitor/app/analytics.md) for more advanced queries.
 - [Create dashboards](../../azure-monitor/app/overview-dashboard.md).
 
  Add more telemetry:

articles/azure-monitor/app/status-monitor-v2-api-set-config.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ This document describes a cmdlet that's a member of the [Az.ApplicationMonitor P
 
 ## Description
 
-Sets the config file without repeating a full reinstallation.
+Sets the config file without performing a full reinstallation.
 Restart IIS for your changes to take effect.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT] 
@@ -123,13 +123,13 @@ C:\Program Files\WindowsPowerShell\Modules\Az.ApplicationMonitor\content\applica
   View your telemetry:
  - [Explore metrics](../../azure-monitor/app/metrics-explorer.md) to monitor performance and usage.
 - [Search events and logs](../../azure-monitor/app/diagnostic-search.md) to diagnose problems.
-- [Use analytics](../../azure-monitor/app/analytics.md) for more advanced queries.
+- [Use Analytics](../../azure-monitor/app/analytics.md) for more advanced queries.
 - [Create dashboards](../../azure-monitor/app/overview-dashboard.md).
 
  Add more telemetry:
  - [Create web tests](monitor-web-app-availability.md) to make sure your site stays live.
 - [Add web client telemetry](../../azure-monitor/app/javascript.md) to see exceptions from web page code and to enable trace calls.
-- [Add Application Insights SDK to your code](../../azure-monitor/app/asp-net.md) so you can insert trace and log calls
+- [Add the Application Insights SDK to your code](../../azure-monitor/app/asp-net.md) so you can insert trace and log calls
 
  Do more with Status Monitor v2:
  - Use our guide to [troubleshoot](status-monitor-v2-troubleshoot.md) Status Monitor v2.

articles/azure-monitor/app/status-monitor-v2-detailed-instructions.md

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ PowerShell needs Administrator-level permissions to make changes to your compute
 - Reference: [About Execution Policies](https://docs.microsoft.com/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.core/about/about_execution_policies?view=powershell-6) and [Set-ExecutionPolicy](
 https://docs.microsoft.com/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.security/set-executionpolicy?view=powershell-6
 ).
-- Command: `Set-ExecutionPolicy -ExecutionPolicy RemoteSigned -Scope Process`
+- Command: `Set-ExecutionPolicy -ExecutionPolicy RemoteSigned -Scope Process`.
 - Optional parameter:
 	- `-Force`. Bypasses the confirmation prompt.
 
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ These steps will prepare your server to download modules from PowerShell Gallery
 
 
 1. Run PowerShell as Admin with an elevated execution policy.
-2. Install NuGet package provider.
+2. Install the NuGet package provider.
 	- Description: You need this provider to interact with NuGet-based repositories like PowerShell Gallery.
 	- Reference: [Install-PackageProvider](https://docs.microsoft.com/powershell/module/packagemanagement/install-packageprovider?view=powershell-6).
 	- Command: `Install-PackageProvider -Name NuGet -MinimumVersion 2.8.5.201`.
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ These steps will prepare your server to download modules from PowerShell Gallery
 	- Description: By default, PowerShell Gallery is an untrusted repository.
 	- Reference: [Set-PSRepository](https://docs.microsoft.com/powershell/module/powershellget/set-psrepository?view=powershell-6).
 	- Command: `Set-PSRepository -Name "PSGallery" -InstallationPolicy Trusted`.
-	- Optional parameters:
+	- Optional parameter:
 		- `-Proxy`. Specifies a proxy server for the request.
 
 	You'll receive this prompt if PowerShell Gallery isn't trusted:
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ These steps will prepare your server to download modules from PowerShell Gallery
 		'PSGallery'?
 		[Y] Yes  [A] Yes to All  [N] No  [L] No to All  [S] Suspend  [?] Help (default is "N"):
 
-	- You can confirm this change and audit all PSRepositories by running the `Get-PSRepository` command.
+	You can confirm this change and audit all PSRepositories by running the `Get-PSRepository` command.
 
 4. Install the newest version of PowerShellGet.
 	- Description: This module contains the tooling used to get other modules from PowerShell Gallery. Version 1.0.0.1 ships with Windows 10 and Windows Server. Version 1.6.0 or higher is required. To determine which version is installed, run the `Get-Command -Module PowerShellGet` command.
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ These steps will prepare your server to download modules from PowerShell Gallery
 		- `-Proxy`. Specifies a proxy server for the request.
 		- `-Force`. Bypasses the "already installed" warning and installs the latest version.
 
-	You'll receive this error if you're not using newest version of PowerShellGet:
+	You'll receive this error if you're not using the newest version of PowerShellGet:
 
 		Install-Module : A parameter cannot be found that matches parameter name 'AllowPrerelease'.
 		At line:1 char:20
@@ -162,15 +162,15 @@ If for any reason you can't connect to the PowerShell module, you can manually d
 ### Manually download the latest nupkg file
 
 1. Go to https://www.powershellgallery.com/packages/Az.ApplicationMonitor.
-2. Select the latest version in the **Version History** table.
+2. Select the latest version of the file in the **Version History** table.
 3. Under **Installation Options**, select **Manual Download**.
 
 ### Option 1: Install into a PowerShell modules directory
 Install the manually downloaded PowerShell module into a PowerShell directory so it will be discoverable by PowerShell sessions.
 For more information, see [Installing a PowerShell Module](https://docs.microsoft.com/powershell/developer/module/installing-a-powershell-module).
 
 
-#### Unzip nupkg as a .zip by using Expand-Archive (v1.0.1.0)
+#### Unzip nupkg as a zip file by using Expand-Archive (v1.0.1.0)
 
 - Description: The base version of Microsoft.PowerShell.Archive (v1.0.1.0) can't unzip nupkg files. Rename the file with the .zip extension.
 - Reference: [Expand-Archive](https://docs.microsoft.com/powershell/module/microsoft.powershell.archive/expand-archive?view=powershell-6).
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ If you're installing the module into any other directory, manually import the mo
 
 When you monitor a computer on your private intranet, you'll need to route HTTP traffic through a proxy.
 
-The PowerShell commands to download and install the Az.ApplicationMonitor from the PowerShell Gallery support a `-Proxy` parameter.
+The PowerShell commands to download and install Az.ApplicationMonitor from the PowerShell Gallery support a `-Proxy` parameter.
 Review the preceding instructions when you write your installation scripts.
 
 The Application Insights SDK will need to send your app's telemetry to Microsoft. We recommend that you configure proxy settings for your app in your web.config file. For more information, see [Application Insights FAQ: Proxy passthrough](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/azure-monitor/app/troubleshoot-faq#proxy-passthrough).

articles/azure-monitor/app/status-monitor-v2-get-started.md

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ If you don't have an Azure subscription, create a [free account](https://azure.m
 > This preview version is provided without a service-level agreement, and we don't recommend it for production workloads. Some features might not be supported, and some might have constrained capabilities.
 > For more information, see [Supplemental Terms of Use for Microsoft Azure Previews](https://azure.microsoft.com/support/legal/preview-supplemental-terms/).
 
-## Download and install the module via PowerShell Gallery
+## Download and install via PowerShell Gallery
 
 ### Install prerequisites
 Run PowerShell as Admin.
@@ -54,9 +54,9 @@ Enable-ApplicationInsightsMonitoring -InstrumentationKey xxxxxxxx-xxxx-xxxx-xxxx
 ```
 
 		
-## Download and install the module manually (offline option)
+## Download and install manually (offline option)
 ### Download the module
-Manually download the latest version of the module from https://www.powershellgallery.com/packages/Az.ApplicationMonitor.
+Manually download the latest version of the module from [PowerShell Gallery](https://www.powershellgallery.com/packages/Az.ApplicationMonitor).
 
 ### Unzip and install Status Monitor v2
 ```powershell

articles/azure-monitor/app/status-monitor-v2-overview.md

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ ms.author: tilee
 
 Status Monitor v2 is a PowerShell module published to the [PowerShell Gallery](https://www.powershellgallery.com/packages/Az.ApplicationMonitor).
 It replaces [Status Monitor](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/azure-monitor/app/monitor-performance-live-website-now).
-This module provides codeless instrumentation of .NET web apps hosted with IIS.
+The module provides codeless instrumentation of .NET web apps hosted with IIS.
 Telemetry is sent to the Azure portal, where you can [monitor](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/azure-monitor/app/app-insights-overview) your app.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
@@ -27,11 +27,11 @@ Telemetry is sent to the Azure portal, where you can [monitor](https://docs.micr
 
 ## PowerShell Gallery
 
-The PowerShell Gallery is located at https://www.powershellgallery.com/packages/Az.ApplicationMonitor.
+The PowerShell Gallery is located here: https://www.powershellgallery.com/packages/Az.ApplicationMonitor.
 
 
 ## Instructions
-- See the [getting started instructions](status-monitor-v2-get-started.md) to get started with concise code samples.
+- See the [getting started instructions](status-monitor-v2-get-started.md) to get a start with concise code samples.
 - See the [detailed instructions](status-monitor-v2-detailed-instructions.md) for a deep dive on how to get started.
 
 ## PowerShell API reference