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articles/operator-insights/TOC.yml

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 - name: Quickstart
   expanded: false
   items:
-  - name: Create an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
+  - name: Deploy an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
     href: data-product-create.md
 - name: Concepts
   expanded: false

articles/operator-insights/architecture.md

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.topic: concept-article
 
 # Architecture of Azure Operator Insights
 
-Azure Operator Insights is a fully managed service that enables the collection and analysis of massive quantities of network data gathered from complex multi-part or multi-vendor network functions. It delivers statistical, machine learning, and AI-based insights for operator-specific workloads to help operators understand the health of their networks and the quality of their subscribers' experiences in near real-time. For more of an overview, see [What is Azure Operator Insights?](overview.md). 
+Azure Operator Insights is a fully managed service that enables the collection and analysis of massive quantities of network data gathered from complex multi-part or multi-vendor network functions. It delivers statistical, machine learning, and AI-based insights for operator-specific workloads to help operators understand the health of their networks and the quality of their subscribers' experiences in near real-time. For more information on the problem Azure Operator Insights solves, see [the general overview of Azure Operator Insights](overview.md).
 
 Azure Operator Insights deploys a Data Product resource to encapsulate a specific category or namespace of data. Azure Operator Insights enables a fourth generation data mesh architecture, which offers query-time federation to correlate and query across multiple Data Products.
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ You can deploy Azure Operator Insights Data Products with any standard Azure int
 
 Each Azure Operator Insights Data Product is scoped for a given category or namespace of data. An example is the data from a single network function (NF) such as a voice SBC. Some Data Products might contain correlated data from multiple NFs, particularly if the NFs are from the same vendor, such as the UPF, SMF, and AMF from a mobile packet core vendor. Each Data Product appears as a single Azure resource in your resource group and subscription. You can deploy multiple Data Products, for different categories of data, for example different mobile packet core NFs from different vendors, or a mobile packet core plus a radio access network (RAN) Data Product. 
 
-Microsoft publishes several publicly available Data Products; the following image shows some examples. Partners and operators can also design and publish Data Products using the Azure Operator Insights data product factory. For more information on the data product factory, see [What is the Azure Operator Insights data product factory (preview)?](data-product-factory.md).
+Microsoft publishes several Data Products; the following image shows some examples. Partners and operators can also design and publish Data Products using the Azure Operator Insights data product factory (preview). For more information on the data product factory, see the [overview of the data product factory](data-product-factory.md).
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/data-product-selection.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal displaying a selection of Data Products from Microsoft.":::
 

articles/operator-insights/data-product-create.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Create an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
-description: In this article, learn how to create an Azure Operator Insights Data Product resource. 
+title: Deploy an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
+description: In this article, learn how to deploy an Azure Operator Insights Data Product resource. 
 author: rcdun
 ms.author: rdunstan
 ms.reviewer: rathishr
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 10/16/2023
 ms.custom: template-quickstart, devx-track-azurecli #Required; leave this attribute/value as-is.
 ---
 
-# Create an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
+# Deploy an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
 
 In this article, you learn how to create an Azure Operator Insights Data Product instance.
 

articles/operator-insights/index.yml

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ landingContent:
     linkLists:
       - linkListType: quickstart
         links:
-          - text: Create an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
+          - text: Deploy an Azure Operator Insights Data Product
             url: data-product-create.md
       - linkListType: how-to-guide
         links:

articles/operator-insights/overview.md

@@ -38,6 +38,8 @@ Azure Operator Insights requires two separate types of resources.
     Diagram of the Azure Operator Insights architecture. It shows ingestion by ingestion agents from on-premises data sources, processing in a Data Product, and analysis and use in Logic Apps and Power BI.
 :::image-end:::
 
+For more information about the architecture of Azure Operator Insights, see [Architecture of Azure Operator Insights](architecture.md).
+
 We provide the following Data Products.
 
 |Data Product  |Purpose  |Supporting ingestion agent|
@@ -47,7 +49,7 @@ We provide the following Data Products.
 
 If you prefer, you can provide your own ingestion agent to upload data to your chosen Data Product.
 
-Azure Operator Insights also offers the data product factory (preview) to allow partners and operators to build new Data Products. For more information, see [What is the Azure Operator Insights data product factory (preview)?](data-product-factory.md).
+Azure Operator Insights also offers the data product factory (preview) to allow partners and operators to build new Data Products. For more information, see [the overview of the Azure Operator Insights data product factory](data-product-factory.md).
 
 ## How can I use Azure Operator Insights for end-to-end insights?
 
@@ -56,3 +58,8 @@ Azure Operator Insights provides built-in support for discovering and joining Da
 ## How do I get access to Azure Operator Insights?
 
 Access is currently limited by request. More information is included in the application form. We appreciate your patience as we work to enable broader access to Azure Operator Insights Data Product. Apply for access by [filling out this form](https://aka.ms/AAn1mi6).
+
+## Related content
+
+- Learn about the [architecture of Azure Operator Insights](architecture.md).
+- [Deploy a Data Product](data-product-create.md).