Minor edits

Minor edits

Author: JackStromberg

articles/application-gateway/application-gateway-private-deployment.md

@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@ Application Gateway v2 can now address each of these items to further eliminate
 4. Ability to override the default route to the Internet (0.0.0.0/0)
 5. DNS resolution via defined resolvers on the virtual network [Learn more](../virtual-network/manage-virtual-network.md#change-dns-servers), including private link private DNS zones.
 
-Each of these features can be configured independently. For example, a public IP address can be used to allow traffic inbound from the Internet and you can define a **_Deny All_** outbound rule in the network security group configuration to prevent data exfiltration. This configuration is valid.
+Each of these features can be configured independently. For example, a public IP address can be used to allow traffic inbound from the Internet and you can define a **_Deny All_** outbound rule in the network security group configuration to prevent data exfiltration.
 
 ## Onboard to public preview
 
-The functionality of the new controls of private IP frontend configuration, control over NSG rules, and control over route tables, are currently in public preview.  To join the public preview, you can opt in to the experience using Azure PowerShell, Azure CLI, or REST API.
+The functionality of the new controls of private IP frontend configuration, control over NSG rules, and control over route tables, are currently in public preview.  To join the public preview, you can opt in to the experience using the Azure portal, PowerShell, CLI, or REST API.
 
-When you join the preview, all new gateways provision with the ability to define any combination of the NSG, Route Table, or private IP configuration features.  If you wish to offboard from the new functionality and return to the current generally available functionality of Application Gateway, you can do so by [unregistering from the preview](#unregister-from-the-preview).
+When you join the preview, all new Application Gateways will provision with the ability to define any combination of the NSG, Route Table, or private IP configuration features.  If you wish to opt out from the new functionality and return to the current generally available functionality of Application Gateway, you can do so by [unregistering from the preview](#unregister-from-the-preview).
 
 For more information about preview features, see [Set up preview features in Azure subscription](../azure-resource-manager/management/preview-features.md)