Merge pull request #288458 from MicrosoftDocs/main

10/15/2024 PM Publish

Author: Taojunshen

articles/azure-cache-for-redis/cache-remove-tls-10-11.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ To meet the industry-wide push toward the exclusive use of Transport Layer Secur
 TLS versions 1.0 and 1.1 also don't support the modern encryption methods and cipher suites recommended by Payment Card Industry (PCI) compliance standards. This [TLS security blog](https://www.acunetix.com/blog/articles/tls-vulnerabilities-attacks-final-part/) explains some of these vulnerabilities in more detail.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> On November 1, 2024, the TLS 1.2 requirement will be enforced.
+> Starting November 1, 2024, the TLS 1.2 requirement will be enforced.
 >
 >
 
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ As a part of this effort, you can expect the following changes to Azure Cache fo
 | September 2023   | TLS 1.0/1.1 retirement announcement                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            |
 | March 1, 2024    | Beginning March 1, 2024, you can't create new caches with the Minimum TLS version set to 1.0 or 1.1 and you can't set the _MinimumTLSVersion_ to 1.0 or 1.1 for your existing cache. The minimum TLS version won't be updated automatically for existing caches at this point. |
 | October 31, 2024 | Ensure that all your applications are connecting to Azure Cache for Redis using TLS 1.2 and Minimum TLS version on your cache settings is set to 1.2.                                                                                                                          |
-| November 1, 2024 | Minimum TLS version for all cache instances is updated to 1.2. This means Azure Cache for Redis instances reject connections using TLS 1.0 or 1.1 at this point.                                                                                                               |
+| Starting November 1, 2024 | Minimum TLS version for all cache instances is updated to 1.2. This means Azure Cache for Redis instances reject connections using TLS 1.0 or 1.1 at this point.                                                                                                               |
 
   > [!IMPORTANT]
   > The content in this article does not apply to Azure Cache for Redis Enterprise/Enterprise Flash because the Enterprise tiers only support TLS 1.2.

articles/azure-maps/creator-onboarding-tool.md

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ Integrate the indoor map into your applications using the Web SDK.
 > [!div class="nextstepaction"]
 > [Use the Azure Maps Indoor Maps module]
 
-[Azure Maps Creator onboarding tool]: creator-onboarding-tool.md
+[Azure Maps Creator onboarding tool]: https://azure.github.io/azure-maps-creator-onboarding-tool
 [Conversion service]: /rest/api/maps-creator/conversion
 [Convert a drawing package]: creator-indoor-maps.md#convert-a-drawing-package
 [dataset]: creator-indoor-maps.md#datasets

articles/azure-netapp-files/azure-netapp-files-register.md

@@ -5,14 +5,14 @@ services: azure-netapp-files
 author: b-hchen
 ms.service: azure-netapp-files
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 01/21/2022
+ms.date: 10/15/2024
 ms.author: anfdocs
 ---
 # Register for NetApp Resource Provider
 
-To use the Azure NetApp Files service, you need to register the NetApp Resource Provider.
+To use Azure NetApp Files, you need to register the NetApp Resource Provider.
 
-1. From the Azure portal, click the Azure Cloud Shell icon on the upper right-hand corner:
+1. From the Azure portal, select the Azure Cloud Shell icon on the upper right-hand corner:
 
       ![Azure Cloud Shell icon](./media/azure-netapp-files-register/azure-netapp-files-azure-cloud-shell.png)
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ To use the Azure NetApp Files service, you need to register the NetApp Resource
 
    The `--wait` parameter instructs the console to wait for the registration to complete. The registration process can take some time to complete.
 
-4. In the Azure Cloud Shell console, enter the following command to verify that the Azure Resource Provider has been registered: 
+4. Verify that the Azure Resource Provider has been registered. To verify, enter the following command in the Azure Cloud Shell console:
     
     ```azurecli
     az provider show --namespace Microsoft.NetApp
@@ -46,11 +46,11 @@ To use the Azure NetApp Files service, you need to register the NetApp Resource
      "resourceTypes": […. 
     ```
 
-   `<SubID>` is your subscription ID.  The `state` parameter value indicates `Registered`.
+   `<SubID>` is your subscription ID. The `state` parameter value indicates `Registered`.
 
-5. From the Azure portal, click the **Subscriptions** blade.
-6. In the Subscriptions blade, click your subscription ID. 
-7. In the settings of the subscription, click **Resource providers** to verify that Microsoft.NetApp Provider indicates the Registered status: 
+5. From the Azure portal, select **Subscriptions**.
+6. From Subscriptions, select your subscription ID. 
+7. In the settings of the subscription, select **Resource providers** to verify that Microsoft.NetApp Provider indicates the Registered status: 
 
       ![Registered Microsoft.NetApp](./media/azure-netapp-files-register/azure-netapp-files-registered-resource-providers.png)
 

articles/azure-netapp-files/faq-data-migration-protection.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ ms.service: azure-netapp-files
 ms.topic: conceptual
 author: b-hchen
 ms.author: anfdocs
-ms.date: 08/31/2023
+ms.date: 10/15/2024
 ---
 # Data migration and protection FAQs for Azure NetApp Files
 
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ This article answers frequently asked questions (FAQs) about Azure NetApp Files
 ## How do I migrate data to Azure NetApp Files?
 Azure NetApp Files provides NFS and SMB volumes. You can use any file-based copy tool to migrate data to the service. 
 
-For more information about the Azure File Migration Program, see [Migrate the critical file data you need to power your applications](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-storage-blog/migrate-the-critical-file-data-you-need-to-power-your/ba-p/3038751).  Also, see [Azure Storage migration tools comparison - Unstructured data](../storage/solution-integration/validated-partners/data-management/migration-tools-comparison.md). 
+For more information about the Azure File Migration Program, see [Migrate the critical file data you need to power your applications](https://techcommunity.microsoft.com/t5/azure-storage-blog/migrate-the-critical-file-data-you-need-to-power-your/ba-p/3038751). Also, see [Azure Storage migration tools comparison - Unstructured data](../storage/solution-integration/validated-partners/data-management/migration-tools-comparison.md). 
 
 NetApp offers a SaaS-based solution, [NetApp Cloud Sync](https://cloud.netapp.com/cloud-sync-service). The solution enables you to replicate NFS or SMB data to Azure NetApp Files NFS exports or SMB shares. 
 
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Migration of certain structured datasets (such as databases) is best done using
 The requirements for data migration from on premises to Azure NetApp Files are as follows: 
 
 - Ensure Azure NetApp Files is available in the target Azure region.
-- Validate network connectivity between the source and the Azure NetApp Files target volume IP address. Data transfer between on premises and the Azure NetApp Files service is supported over ExpressRoute.
+- Validate network connectivity between the source and the Azure NetApp Files target volume IP address. Data transfer between on premises and the Azure NetApp Files service is supported over ExpressRoute. The virtual machine running that the data transfer tool runs on should have access to both the source and destination volumes. 
 - Create the target Azure NetApp Files volume.
 - Transfer the source data to the target volume by using your preferred file copy tool.
 
@@ -38,13 +38,13 @@ By default, your data stays within the region where you deploy your Azure NetApp
 
 ## How do I create a copy of an Azure NetApp Files volume in another Azure region?
 
-Azure NetApp Files provides NFS and SMB volumes.  Any file based-copy tool can be used to replicate data between Azure regions. 
+Azure NetApp Files provides NFS and SMB volumes. Any file based-copy tool can be used to replicate data between Azure regions. 
 
-The [cross-region replication](cross-region-replication-introduction.md) functionality enables you to asynchronously replicate data from an Azure NetApp Files volume (source) in one region to another Azure NetApp Files volume (destination) in another region.  Additionally, you can [create a new volume by using a snapshot of an existing volume](snapshots-restore-new-volume.md).
+The [cross-region replication](cross-region-replication-introduction.md) functionality enables you to asynchronously replicate data from an Azure NetApp Files volume (source) in one region to another Azure NetApp Files volume (destination) in another region. Additionally, you can [create a new volume by using a snapshot of an existing volume](snapshots-restore-new-volume.md).
 
-NetApp offers a SaaS based solution, [NetApp Cloud Sync](https://cloud.netapp.com/cloud-sync-service).  The solution enables you to replicate NFS or SMB data to Azure NetApp Files NFS exports or SMB shares. 
+NetApp offers a SaaS based solution, [NetApp Cloud Sync](https://cloud.netapp.com/cloud-sync-service). The solution enables you to replicate NFS or SMB data to Azure NetApp Files NFS exports or SMB shares. 
 
-You can also use a wide array of free tools to copy data. For NFS, you can use workloads tools such as [rsync](https://rsync.samba.org/examples.html) to copy and synchronize source data into an Azure NetApp Files volume. For SMB, you can use workloads [robocopy](/windows-server/administration/windows-commands/robocopy) in the same manner.  These tools can also replicate file or folder permissions. 
+You can also use a wide array of free tools to copy data. For NFS, you can use workloads tools such as [rsync](https://rsync.samba.org/examples.html) to copy and synchronize source data into an Azure NetApp Files volume. For SMB, you can use workloads [robocopy](/windows-server/administration/windows-commands/robocopy) in the same manner. These tools can also replicate file or folder permissions. 
 
 The requirements for replicating an Azure NetApp Files volume to another Azure region are as follows: 
 - Ensure Azure NetApp Files is available in the target Azure region.

articles/communication-services/resources/troubleshooting/voice-video-calling/includes/codes/call-end.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ author: sloanster
 
 ms.service: azure-communication-services
 ms.subservice: azure-communication-services
-ms.date: 10/10/2024
+ms.date: 10/15/2024
 ms.topic: include
 ms.custom: include file
 ms.author: micahvivion
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ There are different explanations for why a call ended. Here are the meanings of
 | 3100 | 410 | Call setup failed due to unexpected network problem on the client, check the client's network and retry. | UnxpectedClientError | Check network configuration, make sure it follows Azure Communication Calling network [requirements](../../../../../concepts/voice-video-calling/network-requirements.md). |
 | 3101 | 410 | Call dropped due to unexpected network problem on the client, check the client's network and retry. | UnxpectedClientError | Check network configuration, make sure it follows Azure Communication Calling network [requirements](../../../../../concepts/voice-video-calling/network-requirements.md).  |
 | 3111 | 410 | Call setup failed, unable to process media offer while connecting the call. | UnxpectedClientError | Try again. If issue persists, gather [call info](../../references/how-to-collect-call-info.md), [client logs](../../references/how-to-collect-client-logs.md), [browser console logs](../../references/how-to-collect-browser-verbose-log.md) and contact Azure Communication Services support. |
-| 3112 | 410 |  Call setup failed due to network configuration problem on the client side, check the client's network configuration, and retry. | ExpectedError | |
+| 3112 | 410 |  Call setup failed due to network configuration problem on the client side, check the client's network configuration, and retry. | ExpectedError | Learn more details about a call ending with a subcode of 3112 [here](../../../../troubleshooting/voice-video-calling/call-setup-issues/call-ends-with-410-3112.md). |
 | 4097 | 0 | Call ended for all users by the meeting organizer. | Success | |
 | 4502 | 490 | Call failed due to network connectivity problems, browser failed to complete the network HTTP request. | UnexpectedClientError | Client failed to complete HTTP request and response. Try again. If issue persists, gather [call info](../../references/how-to-collect-call-info.md), [client logs](../../references/how-to-collect-client-logs.md), [browser console logs](../../references/how-to-collect-browser-verbose-log.md) and contact Azure Communication Services support. |
 | 4506 | 408 | Call timed out. Check if the callee received and accepted the call. | UnexpectedClientError | Try again. If issue persists, gather [call info](../../references/how-to-collect-call-info.md), [client logs](../../references/how-to-collect-client-logs.md), [browser console logs](../../references/how-to-collect-browser-verbose-log.md) and contact Azure Communication Services support. |

articles/cost-management-billing/costs/allocate-costs.md

@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ The following items are currently unsupported by cost allocation:
 - [Cost Management Power BI App](https://appsource.microsoft.com/product/power-bi/costmanagement.azurecostmanagementapp)
 - [Power BI Desktop connector](/power-bi/connect-data/desktop-connect-azure-cost-management)
 
-The [Usage Details](/rest/api/consumption/usagedetails/list) API version `2021-10-01` and later supports  cost allocation data.
+The [Cost Details](/rest/api/cost-management/generate-cost-details-report/create-operation?view=rest-cost-management-2023-11-01&tabs=HTTP) API and [Exports](/rest/api/cost-management/exports/create-or-update?view=rest-cost-management-2023-11-01&tabs=HTTP) support cost allocation data. However, the [Usage Details](/rest/api/consumption/usagedetails/list) API doesn't support cost allocation data.  
 
 However, cost allocation data results might be empty if you're using an unsupported API or if you don't have any cost allocation rules.
 

articles/cost-management-billing/manage/direct-ea-administration.md

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ If you're not an EA admin, contact your EA admin to request that they add you to
 
 ### If your enterprise administrator can't help you
 
-If your enterprise administrator can't assist you, create an [Azure support request](https://portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/newsupportrequest). Provide the following information:
+If your enterprise administrator can't assist you, create an [Azure support request](https://portal.azure.com/#blade/Microsoft_Azure_Support/HelpAndSupportBlade/newsupportrequest). Provide the following information:
 
 - Enrollment number
 - Account details and authentication type (work, school, or Microsoft account)

articles/cost-management-billing/manage/pay-by-invoice.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ ms.reviewer: lishepar
 ms.service: cost-management-billing
 ms.subservice: billing
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 08/06/2024
+ms.date: 10/15/2024
 ms.author: banders
 ---
 
@@ -40,10 +40,7 @@ To qualify for wire transfer payments, you must:
 - Have a subscription cost that exceeds a certain amount. This amount varies by service location.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> - Payment by wire transfer is available only for customers who use Azure on behalf of a company.
 > - You must pay all outstanding charges before switching to payment by wire transfer.
-> - Your default payment method pays any outstanding invoice. To have a wire transfer pay an outstanding invoice, you must change your default payment method to wire transfer after you're approved.
-> - Currently, payment by wire transfer isn't supported for Azure global in China.
 > - If you switch to payment by wire transfer, you can't switch back to paying by credit or debit card, except for one-time payments.
 > - As of September 30, 2023, Microsoft no longer accepts checks as a payment method.
 

articles/cost-management-billing/reservations/azure-openai.md

@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ For example, assume that your total consumption of provisioned throughput units
 
 ## Buy a Microsoft Azure OpenAI reservation
 
-When you by a reservation, the current UTC date and time are used to record the transaction.
+When you buy a reservation, the current UTC date and time are used to record the transaction.
 
 To buy an Azure OpenAI reservation, follow these steps:
 

articles/cost-management-billing/reservations/prepare-buy-reservation.md

@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Resources that run in a subscription with other offer types don't receive the re
 
 ## Purchase reservations
 
-When you by a reservation, the current UTC date and time are used to record the transaction.
+When you buy a reservation, the current UTC date and time are used to record the transaction.
 
 You can purchase reservations from Azure portal, APIs, PowerShell, CLI. Read the following articles that apply to you when you're ready to make a reservation purchase: