Edits based on Ollie's feedback

Author: b-branco

articles/private-5g-core/collect-required-information-for-a-site.md

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ Collect all the values in the following table to define the packet core instance
    |The data subnet default gateway. You identified this in [Allocate subnets and IP addresses](complete-private-mobile-network-prerequisites.md#allocate-subnets-and-ip-addresses) and it must match the value you used when deploying the AKS-HCI cluster.                               | **N6 gateway** (for 5G) or **SGi gateway** (for 4G). |
    | The network address of the subnet from which dynamic IP addresses must be allocated to user equipment (UEs), given in CIDR notation. You won't need this address if you don't want to support dynamic IP address allocation for this site. You identified this in [Allocate user equipment (UE) IP address pools](complete-private-mobile-network-prerequisites.md#allocate-user-equipment-ue-ip-address-pools). The following example shows the network address format. </br></br>`198.51.100.0/24` </br></br>Note that the UE subnets aren't related to the access subnet.    |**Dynamic UE IP pool prefixes**|
    | The network address of the subnet from which static IP addresses must be allocated to user equipment (UEs), given in CIDR notation. You won't need this address if you don't want to support static IP address allocation for this site. You identified this in [Allocate user equipment (UE) IP address pools](complete-private-mobile-network-prerequisites.md#allocate-user-equipment-ue-ip-address-pools). The following example shows the network address format. </br></br>`198.51.100.0/24` </br></br>Note that the UE subnets aren't related to the access subnet.    |**Static UE IP pool prefixes**|
-   | The Domain Name System (DNS) server addresses to be provided to the UEs connected to this data network. You identified this in [Allocate subnets and IP addresses](complete-private-mobile-network-prerequisites.md#allocate-subnets-and-ip-addresses). You won't need these addresses if you don't want to configure a custom DNS server for the data network. | **DNS Addresses** |
+   | The Domain Name System (DNS) server addresses to be provided to the UEs connected to this data network. You identified this in [Allocate subnets and IP addresses](complete-private-mobile-network-prerequisites.md#allocate-subnets-and-ip-addresses). You won't need these addresses if you don't want to configure a DNS server for the data network. | **DNS Addresses** |
    |Whether Network Address and Port Translation (NAPT) should be enabled for this data network. NAPT allows you to translate a large pool of private IP addresses for UEs to a small number of public IP addresses. The translation is performed at the point where traffic enters the data network, maximizing the utility of a limited supply of public IP addresses.</br></br>If you want to use [UE-to-UE traffic](private-5g-core-overview.md#ue-to-ue-traffic) in this data network, keep NAPT disabled.  |**NAPT**|
 
 ## Next steps

articles/private-5g-core/create-a-site.md

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ In this step, you'll create the mobile network site resource representing the ph
     - Use the same value for both the **S1-MME subnet** and **S1-U subnet** fields (if this site will support 4G UEs).
     - Use the same value for both the **S1-MME gateway** and **S1-U gateway** fields (if this site will support 4G UEs).
 
-1. In the **Attached data networks** section, select **Add data network**. Use the information you collected in [Collect data network values](collect-required-information-for-a-site.md#collect-data-network-values) to fill out the fields. If you decided not to configure a custom DNS server, untick the **Specify DNS addresses for UEs?** checkbox.
+1. In the **Attached data networks** section, select **Add data network**. Use the information you collected in [Collect data network values](collect-required-information-for-a-site.md#collect-data-network-values) to fill out the fields. If you decided not to configure a DNS server, untick the **Specify DNS addresses for UEs?** checkbox.
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/create-a-site/create-site-add-data-network.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal showing the Add data network screen.":::
 

articles/private-5g-core/create-site-arm-template.md

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ Four Azure resources are defined in the template.
     |**User Equipment Static Address Pool Prefix**  | Enter the network address of the subnet from which static IP addresses must be allocated to User Equipment (UEs) in CIDR notation. You can omit this if you don't want to support static IP address allocation. |
     | **Core Network Technology** | Enter *5GC* for 5G, or *EPC* for 4G. |
     | **Napt Enabled** | Set this field depending on whether Network Address and Port Translation (NAPT) should be enabled for the data network. |
-    | **Dns Addresses** | Enter the DNS server addresses. You can omit this if you don't want to configure a custom DNS server for the UEs in this data network. |
+    | **Dns Addresses** | Enter the DNS server addresses. You can omit this if you don't want to configure a DNS server for the UEs in this data network. |
     | **Custom Location** | Enter the resource ID of the custom location that targets the Azure Kubernetes Service on Azure Stack HCI (AKS-HCI) cluster on the Azure Stack Edge Pro device in the site. |
 
 1. Select **Review + create**.

articles/private-5g-core/deploy-private-mobile-network-with-site-arm-template.md

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ The following Azure resources are defined in the template.
     |**Data Network Name**  | Enter the name of the data network. |    
     |**Core Network Technology**  | Enter *5GC* for 5G, or *EPC* for 4G. |
     |**Napt Enabled** | Set this field depending on whether Network Address and Port Translation (NAPT) should be enabled for the data network.|
-    | **Dns Addresses** | Enter the DNS server addresses. You can omit this if you don't want to configure a custom DNS server for the UEs in this data network. |
+    | **Dns Addresses** | Enter the DNS server addresses. You can omit this if you don't want to configure a DNS server for the UEs in this data network. |
     |**Custom Location** | Enter the resource ID of the custom location that targets the Azure Kubernetes Service on Azure Stack HCI (AKS-HCI) cluster on the Azure Stack Edge Pro device in the site.|    
 
 1. Select **Review + create**.