Update move-across-region-dashboard.md

Author: Rajani-Janaki-Ram

articles/resource-mover/move-across-region-dashboard.md

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 ms.author: AarthiV
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 # Move across region dashboard
-This article describes how to monitor your resources moving across regions using Move across region dashboard in Azure Resource Mover. 
-## Monitor in the dashboard
-1. In **Azure Resource Mover**, select **overview**. You can toggle between two pages, **Getting started** and **Move across region dashboard**. **Getting started** page provides options to move your resources across subscription, across resource group and across region.
+This article describes how to monitor the resources you are moving across regions via the Move across region dashboard in Azure Resource Mover. 
+## Monitor via the dashboard
+1. In **Azure Resource Mover**, select **Overview** the left navigation pane. You can toggle between two pages, **Getting started** and **Move across region dashboard**. **Getting started** page provides options to move your resources across subscription, across resource group and across region.
 The **Move across region dashboard** page combines all monitoring information of your move across region in a single place.
     ![Move across region dashboard tab](media\move-across-region-dashboard\Move_across_region_dashboard_tab.png)
-2. The dashboard lists all the moves created by you. Two sections are used to capture the status of your move across regions.
-    In **Resources by move status** section, monitor the percentage and number of resources in each state.
-    In **Error Summary** section, monitor the active errors that affect your move to destination region.
+2. The dashboard lists all the move combinations created by you. The follwoing two sections are used to capture the status of your move across regions.
+    In **Resources by move status**, monitor the percentage and number of resources in each state.
+    In **Error Summary**, monitor the active errors that needs to be resolved before you can succesfully move to the destination region.
     ![Status and issues section](media\move-across-region-dashboard\Move_across_region_dashboard_status_issues.png)
 > [!NOTE]
-> Only the source-destination combination created by you within your subscription would be listed in the dashboard.
+> Only the source-destination combinations that are already created in your chosen subscription would be listed in the dashboard.
 
 3. Use the filters to choose your preferred **Subscription**, **Source region**, and **Destination region**.
     ![Filters](media\move-across-region-dashboard\Move_across_region_dashboard_Filters.png)
 4. Navigate to the details page by selecting on **View all resources** next to the source - destination.
     ![details](media\move-across-region-dashboard\Move_across_region_dashboard_details.png)
 ## Next steps
-[Learn about](about-move-process.md) the move process.
+[Learn about](about-move-process.md) the move process.