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Author: kevinguo-ed

articles/azure-web-pubsub/quickstarts-livetry.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ ms.date: 05/27/2025
 
 # Use LiveTry to explore Azure Web PubSub capabilities
 
-**LiveTry** is a browser-based tool that helps you use Azure Web PubSub’s real-time messaging features — no code or local setup required. With just a few clicks, you can create clients, join groups, and send messages using both client-side and server-side APIs.
+**LiveTry** is a browser-based tool that helps you use Azure Web PubSub’s real-time messaging features—no code or local setup required. With just a few clicks, you can create clients, join groups, and send messages using both client-side and server-side APIs.
 
 This guide walks you through two common messaging scenarios in LiveTry, while helping you understand important concepts like **connections**, **groups**, and **messages**.
 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ You explore two messaging patterns often used in real-time applications:
 
 ## Key concepts
 
-Before getting started, here’s a quick refresher on core Azure Web PubSub concepts that you interact with in LiveTry:
+Before we get started, here’s a quick refresher on core Azure Web PubSub concepts that you interact with in LiveTry:
 
 - **Hub**: A logical unit used to isolate and organize messaging logic. Clients always connect to a hub. With LiveTry, real traffic goes through the resource. For this tutorial, we recommend specifying a test hub name that doesn’t overlap with your production traffic.
 - **Connection**: A persistent WebSocket connection between a client and the Azure Web PubSub service.
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Before getting started, here’s a quick refresher on core Azure Web PubSub conc
 
 ## Scenario 1: Send a message to a group from the server
 
-In this scenario, you simulate server-side broadcasting using the `sendToGroup` REST API. This demonstrates how the service routes a message from your backend to all clients in a specified group.
+In this scenario, you simulate server-side broadcasting using the `sendToGroup` REST API. This scenario demonstrates how the service routes a message from your backend to all clients in a specified group.
 
 ### Steps
 1. In the Azure portal, navigate to your Azure Web PubSub resource.  
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ In this scenario, you simulate server-side broadcasting using the `sendToGroup`
 ### What you’re learning
 You send messages to a group of clients using RESTful APIs. LiveTry demonstrates how server-to-group communication works without needing to deploy a backend. Azure Web PubSub also provides server SDKs for C#, JavaScript, Java, and Python.
 
-Try repeating the steps with multiple clients to visualize message broadcasting in action. LiveTry supports up to five concurrent simulated clients.
+To visualize message broadcasting in action, try repeating the steps with multiple clients . LiveTry supports up to five concurrent simulated clients.
 
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@@ -62,9 +62,9 @@ In this scenario, you create a client sending a message to other clients in the
 
 ### Steps
 1. In **LiveTry**, add two or more clients and specify the same value for the `Initial Groups` field.  
-2. For the client that will send the message, select **Allow client to send to all groups**.  
+2. For the client that sends the message, select **Allow client to send to all groups**.  
 3. Switch to that client’s panel, specify the group name, enter a message, and click **Invoke**.  
-4. The other clients in the group will receive the message in real time.
+4. The other clients in the group receive the message in real time.
 
 ### What you’re learning
 This scenario showcases **client-to-group messaging**, which is ideal in applications where server round-trips introduce unnecessary latency. It's a core part of Web PubSub’s **client publish/subscribe model**.
@@ -82,5 +82,5 @@ This scenario showcases **client-to-group messaging**, which is ideal in applica
 ## Next steps
 
 - Learn more about [key concepts](./key-concepts.md) in Azure Web PubSub  
-- Follow the [Quickstart guide](./quickstarts-pubsub-among-clients.md) to build a local sample  
+- To build a local sample, follow the [Quickstart guide](./quickstarts-pubsub-among-clients.md)   
 - Explore guides under "How-to guides" for common tasks when developing with Azure Web PubSub