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diff --git a/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-aks-edge-essentials-layered-network.md b/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-aks-edge-essentials-layered-network.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.author: patricka
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom:
   - ignite-2023
-ms.date: 10/22/2024
+ms.date: 12/12/2024
 
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to Azure Arc enable AKS Edge Essentials clusters using Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolate devices.
 ms.service: azure-iot-operations
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ This walkthrough is an example of deploying Azure IoT Operations to a special en
 > - [Deployment overview - Azure IoT Operations](../deploy-iot-ops/overview-deploy.md)
 > - [Prepare your Kubernetes cluster - Azure IoT Operations](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-prepare-cluster.md)
 > - [Deploy Azure IoT Operations to an Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster - Azure IoT Operations](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-deploy-iot-operations.md)
->     - You can reuse the cloud dependencies you create for this trial to reduce the complexity when setting up Azure IoT Operations in a Purdue Network environment. For example, **Key vault**, **Managed Identity** and **Storage account**.
+>     - You can reuse the cloud dependencies you create for this trial to reduce the complexity when setting up Azure IoT Operations in a Purdue Network environment. For example, **Key vault**, **Managed Identity**, and **Storage account**.
 >
 > You can't migrate a previously deployed Azure IoT Operations from its original network to an isolated network. For this scenario, follow the steps to begin with creating new clusters.
 
@@ -61,20 +61,21 @@ The next step is to set up an Arc-enabled cluster in level 3 that's compatible f
 
 # [K3S Cluster](#tab/k3s)
 
-- Follow the [Prepare your Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-prepare-cluster.md) to set up and Arc-enable your K3s cluster.
-  1. Prepare your K3s cluster with internet access.
-  1. It is recommanded to install the kubectl client with [these steps](/azure/azure-arc/kubernetes/troubleshooting#azure-cli) to ensure kubectl client is installed properly for Arc-enablement.
-  1. Proceed to Arc-enable the cluster.
-  1. Before you disable internet access of your cluster, you also need to complete the [Prerequisites for deploying Azure IoT Operations](/azure/iot-operations/deploy-iot-ops/howto-deploy-iot-operations#prerequisites).
-  1. After installing the required software components and set up the K3s cluster, you can restrict the internet access for this cluster and configure the [CoreDNS](howto-configure-layered-network.md#configure-custom-dns) to redirect network traffic to your Layered Network Management service at level 4.
-  
+Follow the [Prepare your Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-prepare-cluster.md) to set up and Arc-enable your K3s cluster.
+
+1. Prepare your K3s cluster with internet access.
+1. It's recommended to install the kubectl client with [these steps](/azure/azure-arc/kubernetes/troubleshooting#azure-cli) to ensure kubectl client is installed properly for Arc-enablement.
+1. Proceed to Arc-enable the cluster.
+1. Before you disable internet access of your cluster, you also need to complete the [Prerequisites for deploying Azure IoT Operations](/azure/iot-operations/deploy-iot-ops/howto-deploy-iot-operations#prerequisites).
+1. After installing the required software components and set up the K3s cluster, you can restrict the internet access for this cluster and configure the [CoreDNS](howto-configure-layered-network.md#configure-custom-dns) to redirect network traffic to your Layered Network Management service at level 4.
 
 # [AKS Edge Essentials](#tab/aksee)
 
-- Follow the [Prepare your Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-prepare-cluster.md) to set up and Arc-enable your AKS Edge Essentials cluster.
-  1. Prepare the AKS Edge Essentials with internet access.
-  1. Before you disable internet access of your cluster, you also need to complete the [Prerequisites for deploying Azure IoT Operations](/azure/iot-operations/deploy-iot-ops/howto-deploy-iot-operations#prerequisites).
-  1. After setting up the AKS Edge Essentials cluster, you can restrict the internet access for this cluster and rely on the **DNS server** that is prepared from earlier steps to redirect the network traffic to the Layered Network Management service at level 4. 
+Follow the [Prepare your Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster](../deploy-iot-ops/howto-prepare-cluster.md) to set up and Arc-enable your AKS Edge Essentials cluster.
+
+1. Prepare the AKS Edge Essentials with internet access.
+1. Before you disable internet access of your cluster, you also need to complete the [Prerequisites for deploying Azure IoT Operations](/azure/iot-operations/deploy-iot-ops/howto-deploy-iot-operations#prerequisites).
+1. After setting up the AKS Edge Essentials cluster, you can restrict the internet access for this cluster and rely on the **DNS server** that is prepared from earlier steps to redirect the network traffic to the Layered Network Management service at level 4. 
 
 ---
 
diff --git a/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-l3-cluster-layered-network.md b/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-l3-cluster-layered-network.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ ms.subservice: layered-network-management
 ms.author: patricka
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom: ignite-2023, devx-track-azurecli
-ms.date: 10/22/2024
+ms.date: 12/12/2024
 
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to configure Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolate devices.
 ms.service: azure-iot-operations
diff --git a/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-l4-cluster-layered-network.md b/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-l4-cluster-layered-network.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ ms.subservice: layered-network-management
 ms.author: patricka
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom: ignite-2023, devx-track-azurecli
-ms.date: 10/22/2024
+ms.date: 12/12/2024
 
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to configure Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolate devices.
 ms.service: azure-iot-operations
diff --git a/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-layered-network.md b/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-configure-layered-network.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.author: patricka
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom:
   - ignite-2023
-ms.date: 10/18/2024
+ms.date: 12/12/2024
 
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to configure Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolate devices.
 ms.service: azure-iot-operations
@@ -193,6 +193,7 @@ A custom DNS is only needed for levels 3 and below. This example uses a [dnsmasq
     > ```bash
     > systemctl disable --now systemd-resolved
     > ```
+
 1. Modify the `/etc/dnsmasq.conf` file as shown to route these domains to the upper level.
     - Change the IPv4 address from 10.104.0.10 to respective destination address for that level. In this case, the IP address of the Layered Network Management service in the parent level.
 
diff --git a/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-deploy-aks-layered-network.md b/articles/iot-operations/manage-layered-network/howto-deploy-aks-layered-network.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.author: patricka
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom:
   - ignite-2023
-ms.date: 10/22/2024
+ms.date: 12/12/2024
 
 #CustomerIntent: As an operator, I want to configure Layered Network Management so that I have secure isolate devices.
 ms.service: azure-iot-operations
