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articles/app-service/configure-authentication-user-identities.md

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Code that is written in any language or framework can get the information that i
 | `name_typ` | string           | The name claim type, which is typically a URI providing scheme information about the `name` claim if one is defined. |
 | `role_typ` | string           | The role claim type, which is typically a URI providing scheme information about the `role` claim if one is defined. |
 
-To process this header, your app needs to decode the payload and iterate through the `claims` array to find the claims of interest. It it be convenient to convert them into a representation used by the app's language framework. Here's an example of this process in C# that constructs a [ClaimsPrincipal](/dotnet/api/system.security.claims.claimsprincipal) type for the app to use:
+To process this header, your app needs to decode the payload and iterate through the `claims` array to find the claims of interest. It might be convenient to convert them into a representation used by the app's language framework. Here's an example of this process in C# that constructs a [ClaimsPrincipal](/dotnet/api/system.security.claims.claimsprincipal) type for the app to use:
 
 ```csharp
 using System;

articles/app-service/configure-language-java-data-sources.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Configure data sources for Tomcat, JBoss, or Java SE apps
-description: Learn how to configure data sources for Tomcat, JBoss, or Java SE apps on Azure App Service. You'll find instructions for native Windows and Linux container variants.
+description: Learn how to configure data sources for Tomcat, JBoss, or Java SE apps on Azure App Service, including native Windows and Linux container variants.
 keywords: azure app service, web app, windows, oss, java, tomcat, jboss
 ms.devlang: java
 ms.topic: article
@@ -18,6 +18,8 @@ This article shows how to configure data sources in a Java SE, Tomcat, or JBoss
 
 [!INCLUDE [java-variants](includes/configure-language-java/java-variants.md)]
 
+## Configure the data source
+
 ::: zone pivot="java-javase"
 
 To connect to data sources in Spring Boot applications, we suggest creating connection strings and injecting them into your *application.properties* file.
@@ -189,7 +191,7 @@ This PowerShell completes the following steps:
 
 A common use case for customizing the built-in Tomcat installation is to modify the `server.xml`, `context.xml`, or `web.xml` Tomcat configuration files. App Service already modifies these files to provide platform features. To continue to use these features, it's important to preserve the content of these files when you make changes to them. To accomplish this, use an [XSL transformation (XSLT)](https://www.w3schools.com/xml/xsl_intro.asp).
 
-Add an XSL transform file called *configure.ps1* to the *%HOME%_\site* directory. You can use the following XSL transform code to add a new connector node to `server.xml`. Note the *Identity Transform*, which preserves the original contents of the file.
+Add an XSL transform file called *configure.ps1* to the *%HOME%_\site* directory. You can use the following XSL transform code to add a new connector node to `server.xml`. The *identity transform* at the beginning  preserves the original contents of the configuration file.
 
 ```xml
 <xsl:stylesheet version="1.0" xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform">

articles/app-service/configure-language-java-security.md

@@ -64,11 +64,11 @@ To disable this feature, create an Application Setting named `WEBSITE_AUTH_SKIP_
 
 ::: zone-end
 
-::: zone pivot="java-jboss"
+<!-- ::: zone pivot="java-jboss"
 
 For JBoss EAP, `[TODO]`.
 
-::: zone-end
+::: zone-end -->
 
 ## Configure TLS/SSL
 

articles/app-service/includes/quickstart-java/quickstart-java-linux-maven-pivot.md

@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ cd petstore-ee7
 mvn clean install
 ```
 
-If you see a message about being in **detached HEAD** state, this message is safe to ignore. Because you won't making any commits, detached HEAD state is appropriate.
+If you see a message about being in **detached HEAD** state, this message is safe to ignore. Because you won't make any commits, detached HEAD state is appropriate.
 
 ---
 

articles/app-service/tutorial-java-spring-cosmosdb.md

@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ yes | cp -rf .prep/* .
 
 Follow these steps to create an Azure Cosmos DB database in your subscription. The TODO list app will connect to this database and store its data when running, persisting the application state no matter where you run the application.
 
-1. Login to your Azure CLI, and optionally set your subscription if you have more than one connected to your login credentials.
+1. Sign in to your Azure CLI, and optionally set your subscription if you have more than one connected to your sign-in credentials.
 
     ```azurecli
     az login
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ Then run the script:
 source .scripts/set-env-variables.sh
 ```
 
-These environment variables are used in `application.properties` in the TODO list app. The fields in the properties file set up a default repository configuration for Spring Data:
+These environment variables are used in `application.properties` in the TODO list app. The fields in the properties file define a default repository configuration for Spring Data:
 
 ```properties
 azure.cosmosdb.uri=${COSMOSDB_URI}

articles/zone-pivot-groups.yml

@@ -2157,7 +2157,7 @@ groups:
     title: Manual
 # Owner: jefmarti
 - id: app-service-openai
-  title: App Service Open AI
+  title: App Service OpenAI
   prompt: Choose a language
   pivots:
   - id: openai-dotnet