Learn Editor: Update azure-file-migration-program-solutions.md

Author: karauten

articles/storage/solution-integration/validated-partners/data-management/azure-file-migration-program-solutions.md

@@ -23,13 +23,13 @@ This page only lists the partners participating in our Storage Migration program
 
 __Free to use – refer to [FAQ]() for program parameters__
 
-__[Atempo Miria](https://aka.ms/atempooffer)__ – Migrate files and objects to Azure Blob Storage, Azure Files, and Azure NetApp Files  
+- __[Atempo Miria](https://aka.ms/atempooffer)__ – Migrate files and objects to Azure Blob Storage, Azure Files, and Azure NetApp Files  
 
-__[Cirrus Migrate Cloud ](https://aka.ms/cirrusoffer)__– Migrate from Storage Area Networks and Block Storage
+- __[Cirrus Migrate Cloud](https://aka.ms/cirrusoffer)__ – Migrate from Storage Area Networks and Block Storage
 
-__[Data Dynamics StorageX ](https://aka.ms/datdynoffer)__– Migrate files and objects to Azure Blob Storage, Azure Files, and Azure NetApp Files
+- __[Data Dynamics StorageX](https://aka.ms/datdynoffer)__ – Migrate files and objects to Azure Blob Storage, Azure Files, and Azure NetApp Files
 
-__[Komprise Elastic Data Migration ](https://aka.ms/kompriseoffer)__– Migrate files and objects to Azure Blob Storage, Azure Files, and Azure NetApp Files
+- __[Komprise Elastic Data Migration](https://aka.ms/kompriseoffer)__ – Migrate files and objects to Azure Blob Storage, Azure Files, and Azure NetApp Files
 
 __Note__
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ __Q:__ What is provided by the ISV as part of the program?
 
 __A:__ The software license to support your migration, an onboarding session (live or recorded education), and email based support.
 
-The ISVs do have right of refusal to accept an engagement under 50TB. They can suggest that you purchase a professional services or support contract if hands-on or phone support is required.
+The ISVs do have right of refusal to accept an engagement under 50 TB. They can suggest that you purchase a professional services or support contract if hands-on or phone support is required.
 
 __Important -__ Support is provided by the ISV, not Microsoft.
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ __A:__ None. Reach out to [[email protected]](mailto:[email protected]), [azure@c
 
 
 
-__Q:__ Does participating in the program mean I am no longer eligible for other programs like the [Azure Migrate and Modernize](https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/solutions/migration/migrate-modernize-innovate) (AMM) Program?
+__Q:__ Does participating in the program mean I am no longer eligible for other programs like the [Azure Migrate and Modernize](https://azure.microsoft.com/solutions/migration/migrate-modernize-innovate) (AMM) Program?
 
 __A:__ No. The Storage Migration Program (SMP) is complimentary and additive to AMM. You can use AMM to migrate databases and VMs and use SMP to migrate the shared file or object store used by the same application. SMP does not impact the scope of your AMM engagement at all.
 
@@ -71,26 +71,30 @@ __A:__ You can use the program and tools to move the data from either on-premis
 
 
 
-__Q:__ I am concerned that my available bandwidth is a problem and migration will impact day-to-day business. How can I be sure the copy activity is not disruptive?
+__Q:__ I am concerned that my available bandwidth is a problem and migration may impact day-to-day business. How can I be sure the copy activity is not disruptive?
 
-__A:__ Each partner has the experience and the tooling to help guide a non-impactful migration. Komprise developed a tool to identify bottlenecks and use that data to tune migration parameters and windows accordingly, for example. If bandwidth and project windows are a problem, you can use Azure DataBox for initial seeding. The ISVs do a tremendous amount of work continuously to improve copy performance and efficiency as Komprise illustrates with [HyperTransport](https://www.komprise.com/blog/komprise-hypertransfer-is-here-turbocharge-your-cloud-migrations/).
+__A:__ Each partner has the experience and the tooling to help guide a nonimpactful migration. Komprise developed a tool to identify bottlenecks and use that data to tune migration parameters and windows accordingly, for example. If bandwidth and project windows are a problem, you can use Azure DataBox for initial seeding. The ISVs do a tremendous amount of work continuously to improve copy performance and efficiency as Komprise illustrates with [HyperTransport](https://www.komprise.com/blog/komprise-hypertransfer-is-here-turbocharge-your-cloud-migrations/).
 
 
 
 __Q:__ How long is the program running? What about [Azure Storage Mover](/azure/storage-mover/service-overview)?
 
-__A:__ We do not have an end date for the Azure Storage Migration Program. Microsoft is committed to our relationships with Atempo, Cirrus Data, Data Dynamics and Komprise and have received tremendous feedback. We will offer one year’s notice prior to discontinuing the Storage Migration Program.
+__A:__ We do not have an end date for the Azure Storage Migration Program. Microsoft is committed to our relationships with Atempo, Cirrus Data, Data Dynamics, and Komprise and received excellent feedback. One year’s notice is expected before the discontinuation of the Storage Migration Program.
 
-Storage Mover is a maturing service and the supported source - target pairings will increase over time. Our partners have robust offerings today that support every combination of migration scenario we have encountered. Their robust features have helped customers save money by selectively moving data from a single source to multiple targets based on business value (ex. Older, untouched files or objects migrated to Azure Blob Storage Cool or Archive tier while active data is migrated to Azure Files, Azure NetApp Files, or Azure Blob Storage Hot or Premium tier). We expect Storage Mover and the Storage Migration Program to coexist for some time.
+Storage Mover is a maturing service and the supported source - target pairings will increase over time. Our partners have robust offerings today that support every combination of migration scenario encountered. Their robust features helped customers save money by selectively moving data from a single source to multiple targets. The movement is based on business value. Example: Older files are migrated to Azure Blob Storage Cold or Archive tier and active data migrated to Azure Files or Azure NetApp Files. We expect Storage Mover and the Storage Migration Program to coexist for some time.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-- [Azure Storage Migration Program](https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/us-partner-blog/2022/02/23/new-azure-file-migration-program-streamlines-unstructured-data-migration/)
-- [Storage migration overview](../../../common/storage-migration-overview.md)
+- [Learn more about Storage migration](../../../common/storage-migration-overview.md)
+
 - [Choose an Azure solution for data transfer](../../../common/storage-choose-data-transfer-solution.md?toc=/azure/storage/blobs/toc.json)
+
 - [Migrate to Azure file shares](../../../files/storage-files-migration-overview.md)
+
 - [Migrate to Data Lake Storage with WANdisco LiveData Platform for Azure](../../../blobs/migrate-gen2-wandisco-live-data-platform.md)
+
 - [Copy or move data to Azure Storage with AzCopy](../../../common/storage-use-azcopy-v10.md)
+
 - [Migrate large datasets to Azure Blob Storage with AzReplicate (sample application)](/samples/azure/azreplicate/azreplicate/)
 
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